Thanks for your entry. I really liked how simple it was, yet showed a lot of emotion.
April 1st, 2009 at 01:38am
You actually made the emotions, simply as a balloon floating away, real to the reader.
"Kara didn’t like what she had just witnessed, though.
“Ewwww!” she cackled."
That reminded me of when I was a little kid.
But, um yeah, this story is wonderful.
