Breathe - Comments

the apex predator;; (150)

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Ooh. *claps*

I'm not a fan of MCR (yet) but this was really good. So I guess Mikey and Gerard are brothers? *feels really stupid right about now*

I see all kinds of Frerards so this was cool.

But we're in the same contest, dangit. May the best writer(me) win xP

April 7th, 2009 at 03:36pm

Alice Verney (150)

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very cute

April 2nd, 2009 at 06:05am

mannaquin (250)

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its a good story, but its repetitive. you just state the song and the story. you didn't really incorporate...

April 1st, 2009 at 06:15pm

Lucky Strikes (100)

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That was awesome, really good, really ... awesome.

I know there are so many waycest one-shots out there that are seem like to be like yours. But yours is special. I didn't regonized them at first either, I thought the 'you' character was Gerard, but it was Mikey. :XD

I adored it. (:

Great job, like always :]

April 1st, 2009 at 05:10pm