Seize the Day - Comments

ohhh yay! :)
hmmm at least your giving some kind of background info on the whole relationship! tease arent u?
ohh well. love all this tension! :cute:

“Yeah, I do call them boobs,” I seethe. “Just like you call this,” I grab a hold of his crotch. “pathetic thing between your legs a dick,”
-->this was priceless! :lmfao

BRIANS A FUCKIG CHEATER ISN'T HE!
ISN'T HE!!!!

Quote

“Yeah, I do call them boobs,” I seethe. “Just like you call this,” I grab a hold of his crotch. “pathetic thing between your legs a dick,”

Haha.

I like this story, you know why? its because angie has some fairly big balls. She's gutsy. I like her!

update please!!!!! =] i love it!

Amazing, I hope you get to why they hate each other VERY soon, it's eating me up not knowing why.

haha totally loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!

“Yeah, I do call them boobs,” I seethe. “Just like you call this,” I grab a hold of his crotch. “pathetic thing between your legs a dick,”

Came out beautifully... I especially loved that she grabbed him to emphasize her point... Nicely done =)

I found it amusing I was too drunk to drive (which reminds me of a song, Too Drunk To Drive, but the band is Aussie and you wouldn't know them, so this sentence is pointless) in the flashback, since I'm always designated driver in real life.. haha. But hey, it's a bummer all the girls weren't too drunk.. could've saved her a lot of furture trouble, it seems. haha.

Him mentioning that she used to like to snuggle (or hug, I can't remember exact words) is interesting... though if I was her, that would've pissed me off that he knew that. There's nothing worse than someone you really loathe knowing those kinds of intimate details about you.. it just makes you hate them even more. haha.

I honestly can't wait for more of this one.. it's great =)

I loved the update! =D
It was great, like always! :D
I can't wait to find out what exactly happened between Angie and Brian..
Can't wait for more!

I hope you'll get over your writer's block for These Feelings Can't Be Right ^^"

great update
at leasted he remember things about her
can't wait for the next update

awesome update!
I loved that you gave us a little insight on their past!
cant wait for more of it, love this!

I love this, and it's amazing, all of your storeis are great, your an amazing writer.

Wow! I apologize so much for missing so many updates!! But i LOVED! u must write more. It's so funny how they have to share a room. It's not cool for angie, but it's just so freakin hilarious. haha!

two: Liking the girls' band name. Wondering what really happened between them; cause it seems that they had feelings for each other, got together, she caught him in something to break her heart, and now she hates him. Hope this is explained in later chapters.

one: Sounds interesting. Wondering what the name of their band is called though? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Oh my goodness that last chapter was so, so good times 847649532. Especially the second half, that just about killed me when you described the water droplet running down Bri's chest....ooo maaaannnn... haha. And of course I loved all of the comedic moments, including the "midget stripper" comment. That made me laugh right out loud just picturing him saying that and trying to embarass her. I also loved that you used Skin as one of her songs as well! I was actually thinking about this story the other day and how you asked about using Liar, Liar, and I thought that Skin would be a great song for you to use as well and you ended up using it! I think it's probably my favorite song that has come from Instant Star so I'm basically having an IS fangirl attack over here lol. But anyway, I really loved how you executed this chapter, it was so very well done; the descriptions were spot on, the comedic timing was great, and the mounting drama left me wanting more. I'm really looking forward to the next update for this one! <33

awesome update
loved the instant star reference :)

Awesome update I loved it, I can't wait to find out why they hate eachother so much.

At least Brian can be nice =) well, except for what happened at the reception, I mean “Aw, come on, baby! Don’t be like that! I know you’re mad about the midget stripper, but I told you it meant nothing!” LOL!

I loved the update and I look froward to more, maybe when she'll wake she'll be hugging Brian like her life depends on him? It could be fun =)

Favourite lines:

“Aw, come on, baby! Don’t be like that! I know you’re mad about the midget stripper, but I told you it meant nothing!”

Why can I see him really saying something like that? Seriously, it may as well be a direct quote. hahaha.

“Oh. Well, I know that you guys are all at each other’s throats and all… But I really don’t feel like cuddling up to Matt tonight. Sorry.”

I get that he's a guy and it doesn't appeal to him, but still.. he's crazy = p I still love him, though =)

“Hey, Duck Man!”

HELL YES! We should copyright that, coz we're just that cool... = p hahahaha

Well, I get how Lynn and Zacky thought it would be funny and a good idea to force them into a bed together, but it's kind of immature and pretty mean. Just coz it's clear that it upsets Angie, so Lynn, being her best friend, should probably be a bit more understanding.

Her uncomfortableness (is that even a word?) is clearing something she wont see the truth behind. Meaning, reason she's so uncomfortable, in my opinion, is coz she's fighting back feelings and an attraction she doesn't want to admit to. It's easier to hate someone than actually admit to having complicated feelings... =)

Look forward to more! But yes, studies come first, so I'll be more than paitent =)

im glad they're kinda getting along.
but gahh...this problem and tension they have is such a mystery!
hmm i believe that they will be all cuddled up the next day when they wake up. :cute:

lol I loved what Zacky and Lynn did
I'm glad they were actually getting along, hope they can keep it up!