Okaaaaaay. This has been by far my most favorite piece of yours. All right, okay, wait. Before I begin to utterly gush over this or whatever it is I’m going to do, I have to say that the colors in the layout didn’t work so well with it. I’m not entirely sure where the purple came from when the feel of ice and winter is what’s so dominantly displayed in your writing. But anyway, that’s just me. Out of everything I’ve read of yours, I felt like this had the most detail and emotion put in it. It was simply beautiful through and through, and I couldn’t concrit the writing if I bothered to try.
nawwwww!!! that was cute :D i love it how they so secretive :P im like that with my girl... rents are homophobes... cant wait for more/others :D i enjoyed this alot... i read it 3 times in a row :)
It was really beautifully written. So short and yet poignant -- almost more of a backdrop than a story. You painted a scene so beautifully with all of the description that I could truly see it. It reminded me of the beginning of a movie when the camera pans across the panorama focusing down on the characters that you don't know yet. I definitely grabbed my attention and whetted my appetite for more.