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  • z3ez

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    You should update =]
    November 3rd, 2007 at 05:09am
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    -new reader-
    ooh i like this!
    very original

    <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
    July 13th, 2007 at 02:21am
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    Thank You.<3

    I tell you what, I'll PM you guys when I get back, because I didn't bring my story with me on holidays, and in the mean time, please spread the word around! :D
    July 11th, 2007 at 01:53am
  • beautiful_diasterx3

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    lurve it.
    July 11th, 2007 at 01:33am
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    Bad news: I'm on holiday, but I can't update until I get back.
    July 9th, 2007 at 02:16pm
  • z3ez

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    yay more lol
    July 7th, 2007 at 06:38pm
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    The fourth chapter is posted.
    Sorry about that. My computer screwed up, and I lost half the chapter.
    So half of chapter four is posted, I'll edit and add the rest once I type it back up.

    Thanks for reading.
    July 7th, 2007 at 04:23pm
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    Yeah, I'll post more in about ten minutes. :)
    July 6th, 2007 at 10:24pm
  • Fear;;

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    I love this story!

    More Please?
    July 6th, 2007 at 07:47pm
  • z3ez

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    well its a good story
    im sure youll get more readers soon^^
    July 6th, 2007 at 07:26pm
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    Well thank you for being my first official reader. In Love

    I recently posted 2 or 3 more chapters.
    Anyone who is browsing this thread, I think you should read it.
    I think my story is really good, not to be too cocky, but I worked hard on it.

    I am a serious writer, and constructive criticism is important to me. I encourage it.

    Thanks for reading.
    -Bronte.
    July 6th, 2007 at 07:24pm
  • z3ez

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    yay
    i really like this
    i wish i could think of something more creative to say
    but oh well lol
    July 6th, 2007 at 07:15pm
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    Thank you. :)
    More in about 15 minutes.
    July 6th, 2007 at 05:50pm
  • z3ez

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    this is really cool
    i like the pairing alot
    cant wait for more^^
    July 6th, 2007 at 05:33pm
  • Bronte is pretty rad

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    This is my Pete Wentz/ Shaant Hacikyan love story. I think you'll find that it is unique, and not stereotypical. I think you would enjoy it. Give it a chance, I've worked really hard on it.

    Constructive criticism is not only welcome, it is encouraged.

    Read and comment on 'Extemporze: a tale from the kissing booth' here.
    July 6th, 2007 at 05:29pm
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