Extemporize: a tale from the kissing booth. - Comments

You should update =]

-new reader-
ooh i like this!
very original

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Thank You.<3

I tell you what, I'll PM you guys when I get back, because I didn't bring my story with me on holidays, and in the mean time, please spread the word around! :D

lurve it.

Bad news: I'm on holiday, but I can't update until I get back.

yay more lol

The fourth chapter is posted.
Sorry about that. My computer screwed up, and I lost half the chapter.
So half of chapter four is posted, I'll edit and add the rest once I type it back up.

Thanks for reading.

Yeah, I'll post more in about ten minutes. :)

I love this story!

More Please?

well its a good story
im sure youll get more readers soon^^

Well thank you for being my first official reader.

I recently posted 2 or 3 more chapters.
Anyone who is browsing this thread, I think you should read it.
I think my story is really good, not to be too cocky, but I worked hard on it.

I am a serious writer, and constructive criticism is important to me. I encourage it.

Thanks for reading.
-Bronte.

yay
i really like this
i wish i could think of something more creative to say
but oh well lol

Thank you. :)
More in about 15 minutes.

this is really cool
i like the pairing alot
cant wait for more^^

This is my Pete Wentz/ Shaant Hacikyan love story. I think you'll find that it is unique, and not stereotypical. I think you would enjoy it. Give it a chance, I've worked really hard on it.

Constructive criticism is not only welcome, it is encouraged.

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