Runs in the Family - Comments

I am planning on finishing, I kind of took a break from writing since I've been busy with school and work, but I promise I will write for this story very, very soon! :D

hey are you going to finish or have you thought of more for this story?

oh my god. my heart literally is in pain. this is an amazing story, it almost made me cry :( you're an amazing writer :)

Aw thanks you guys.
I promise the next chapter will not disappoint.
:D

this story is extremely underated, i love it.
it's sad, but i love it.
fuck brendon in this though, he's a selfish twat.
the last chapter made me cry.
i'm looking forward to the next, and final update.
=]

i like this story :) but chapter nine will be its ending?! noooooo! :( and now i'm sad. but its' a cute story.

Wow!

Aw noo i don't want it to end lol

Noooo!
I don't want it to end!
It's so cute yet sad.

I really like this, it's very well written and although it's a fan-fiction the storyline has something different. I can't quite figure out what, but I think it's just the way you've worded everything, I really enjoyed reading it.

What I really liked about this was how you wrote the dialogue between Amelia and Ryan, especially in chapter 8. It seemed very realistic, and a lot of the time dialogue in stories can be very wooden and sounds badly worded, but you wrote it perfectly, which I really liked (:

I really like the character of Amelia overall, you've written her very well so she seems like an actual person rather than just a predictable character. I loved the story, I'm subscribing and I look forward to reading the end :D

This is really good!
I like how there isn't just one problem so its more interesting :)
I feel so sorry for Ryan though

Oh my gosh! I love the update :)

Loved the update
More soon please
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Amazing update.
I can't believe Ryan made Bden leave though :'(

uhh you know what? i think you should update, asappp! ;D

this is really good(:
you should update soon!

Update soon please
could i get a link of the one shot plaese?

=O?!?! SUSPENSE MUCH!? Where's she going 'cause Bronx is being dickish, TO JERRY'S HOUSE?! or the library.. |
Amazing chapter (:

Mean brendon!!! :P
But wouldent she get bulled more beacuse of her parents by some biches? just asking

Wow that was just... wow...