Saving Amy - Comments

That was soooo good-sad-but good.I was thinking about entering that contest but i doubht i could beat that(^_^)

Yep, My first (:
Thankies

Very nice!
I especially loved the last line of this. It rounded it off perfectly.
Was this really your first one-shot?

WOW. Oh and if you want to make a link its [url=TypeTheAddressHere] Link Name [/url] So for a link to this page it would turn out like this. I loved your story! Hope that helps!

Hmm...I guess I could make a happyyyyyyyy story (:
Thanks a mill!!!
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wow..........that was good.... v. sad though..... You should write a story though :) and make it happyyyyyyy, lol. But yeah - nice one-shot x

Eee Thankies! (: That's way encouraging!!! And tell Becka thank you very much! :D
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Okay as I said in the contest I will be commenting all entries.

I say this as a contest judge and not as your friend as Im trying to be fair as I possibly can.

I really liked this, you write with great emotion. You feel Eliza's pain when she finds out that Amy has died. You feel the emotion when she kills herself. You write it so well that I can almost feel what happens when it happens.

I asked my friend Becka who has never read any of your stuff to read and comment on this one shot. I asked her for a completly unbiased(I think thats the right word) opinion. This is what she says:

This is actually amazing. The plot is intense, gripping, and deeply moving. The whole thing just oozes brilliance to be honest. I’ve read only a little of her other stuff, but it seems to me we have a genious child prodigy type (:

Ignore the weird way she puts stuff shes always been like that.