Frank and Gerard's Forbidden Love - Comments

Famous Friend. (105)

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That was very cute and adorable.
Very unique as well. :mrgreen:

It's not really what I was looking for, because they end up together and happy.
But I enjoyed reading it.

May 9th, 2009 at 10:57pm

Defiant Till The End (100)

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Aww!

May 9th, 2009 at 10:15am

Christ! (100)

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Omg... mine was so bad compared to this!! D :
Absolutley wonderful! You're a great author :cute:

x

April 21st, 2009 at 07:42pm

Bandit.Lee (100)

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omg that was soo cute.
i loved it!!!!!!>

xo

April 21st, 2009 at 09:31am

conk (100)

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Amazee As Usual Katie (:
Not Like I'd Expect Any Less :D
*claps*
xx

April 4th, 2009 at 09:16pm

Skiba (150)

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One...two...three:
AWWWWWWWWWWW!

This was seriously one of the cutest things i have ever read! With that prompt, most people would've done the predictable 'Romeo and Juilet' type thing, but your idea was much more original!

“It was Frankie’s mommy.” he said not taking his eyes off the screen because Batman and Robin were fighting the bad guys.
Haha! This is exactly what i was [still] like with cartoons! Especially if it's anything to do with superheroes.

“I want to kiss you like they kiss the girls.” said Frank quietly

Aww bless! The way Frank said it 'quietly' suggests that maybe he thought it was wrong too, or his mother had given him the same message as Gerard's. I love the way they are so innocent, yet so forward!

Good job! And good luck with the contest!

April 4th, 2009 at 08:47pm