August 25th, 2010 at 09:42pm
Amazing.
I need more
Updates, soon?
(:
Prove It - Comments
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June 22nd, 2010 at 01:36am
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Ooh…poor you. I don't watch soccer, so I don't really have an opinion. I think you should…either pretend nothing changed or find a reason that he'd switch in the story and make it work somehow.
Anyway…good chapter, and depressing, too. I like depressing stuff. :mrgreen:June 17th, 2009 at 02:01am -
Yeah, that's true. But at least I like Real Madrid too, they have Sergio Ramos :] hahaJune 11th, 2009 at 08:40pm
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you know i totally agree with you this sucks but you know what i will always support man united let him go. they will see for themselves that this was a big mistakeJune 11th, 2009 at 08:21pm
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aww it's so cute hope yo update soonMay 24th, 2009 at 12:26am
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Nice…I'm not so sure that Camry should be so mad at him, though…he didn't know Cristiano was there, and he just was trying to show his feelings. I'm not saying it wasn't wrong, just that she shouldn't have been so nasty!
That's not the criticism part, that's me yelling at the character. The criticism part is, I think you should have developed Fernando's character a little more before you make drama with him…May 12th, 2009 at 01:53am -
Good update, I have no speculations this time to use my new technique. You need to tell me when there's an update, or I won't remember to read…I don't subscribe to stories on here because I'd rather not get e-mails about them.May 2nd, 2009 at 03:11am
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another great update it's funny how she is with the spanish team lol !! hope you update soonApril 25th, 2009 at 12:12am
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aww your story is soo cute it makes me laugh update soon i loved the chapter =PApril 24th, 2009 at 06:46pm
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lol. I really do love you're story. It's very fun to read.April 23rd, 2009 at 01:21am
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another excelent update. You know, this story really recks my rep as an story stalking internet ninja. You're not supposed to know I'm here, but you keep asking for comments if I want you to update!
Don't worry, I'm not mad =)
LOL anyway...April 21st, 2009 at 02:40am -
love it i think fernando gets feelings for her hope you update soonApril 19th, 2009 at 11:59am
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I bet one of the Spanish guys will get feelings for her…good update!April 17th, 2009 at 11:14pm
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You explained my question! Yay! Now I really need to come up with an idea so you'll use it! And my response to the chapter…I don't think that Cristiano will be happy about Camry being on the new team. And I think something bad should happen soon. Not something outrageous, but something that could happen to the characters that have already been introduced. Perhaps Caine (that was his name, right? The guy who liked Camry?) could do something to sabotage Cris and Camry's relationship?April 16th, 2009 at 10:10pm
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great chapters hop you update soonApril 16th, 2009 at 09:41pm
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yay!!! camry is kick ass i wonder how the guys will react to the news
your story rocks!!!!!!!!!April 16th, 2009 at 02:07am -
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I really am enjoying this story.April 16th, 2009 at 01:55am -
funny little buddy and hey liverpool is a great team and frenando torres is really hot loved you chapter your an awsome writer update soooonn!!!!!!!!!! =PApril 16th, 2009 at 01:22am
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Yay! You got more then two. I still count as at least one, right?
En-nay-weighs
Yet another enjoyable update. Bravo.April 16th, 2009 at 12:57am
ANYHOW.
That was so abruuuupttt and saaaaddd!
If there wasn't a sequel, I probably would have left you a sobbing rant, complaining about this story not being the 785 chapters I wanted it to be :)
On another note though; at least it seems Villa is never too tired to help someone off the ground.
CLASSY.
Xabi would approve.