Kayley's Escape Plan. - Comments, page 5

Nialls Freckles (100)

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ahh
this reminds me of my dreams
=/
no fun

keep writing though [:

April 15th, 2009 at 10:07pm

cheesemaree (100)

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as if unraveled words. I've read your story Long Rides and it's nothing like this one. Things may be similar sometimes but they're things that could happen in any story.

April 14th, 2009 at 08:53am

lennonzest- (100)

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Chapter 3 has so many similarity with my story Long Rides XD

Escape Plan: Kyle accompanied Kayley 'till asleep because of her nightmares.
Long Rides: Alex accompanied Athe 'till asleep because Alex offered himself to be Athe's second personal heater.

Escape Plan: Kyle & Kayley sleeping together and when Kayley's awake 4 guys were cooing and aww-ing at them.
Long Rides: Athe & Alex sleeping together and when Athe's awake Jonathan was staring at them and told her that everyone was staring at them and taking pictures.

Escape Plan: Jonathan wanted Kayley to be on stage.
Long Rides: Alex & Jonathan introduced Athe and her friends to the crowd.

Escape Plan: Kyle thought Kayley's ex was abusive.
Long Rides: Athe's ex was abusive.

Aaaand, Kayley and Athe are both so afraid of something, which are their psycho ex-boyfriends! Wowowowow XD

I love this though :D

April 11th, 2009 at 08:00pm