A Cigarette Affair - Comments

Whoo! Update (sort of) on chapter 11. *kisses the ground* I am one happy camper, hehe. I have no idea how you do it, love, but when you do it's AMAZING.

Sorry for the double post. There's no delete button.

Hey, I still read this!
And I loved the last two chapters.
Just sayin'. :)

Hey, I still read this!
And I loved the last two chapters.
Just sayin'. :)

Just like a deep inhale of a ciggy, your story has trapped itself within my lungs, and so you must continue it, so I can live on. <3

I adore the story format, the pretty words, the flow. It's very effortless and I l♥ve reading it. I wish this were a published book sitting on the bookshelf because I would be pulling out crinkled bills and buying it already. This is just to say...

'Ey, miss! Get that plot going! Not to pressure you or anything, of course. But it is fair time for some major action (major action, oh yeah! just kidding).

On another note, I like the shortness of the chapters in how they can keep our attention. Short and bittersweet. Lovely choice of words, too.

Oh! You know what this story reminds me of? That game where someone takes a bunch of photos of tiny details or parts of a larger object and you have to guess what the object is! It's like that, but in story form.

As for where to go next, maybe have that mysterious new boy and Pippa cross paths? Or maybe Pippa commits suicide, and finds herself in an afterlife where she mysteriously sees the new boy, because he's an agent or something of that world? Or maybe the new boy offs himself too and then they're stuck in the afterlife together? I've no idea, just tossing out random ideas.

It reminds me, sort of, of this amazing story on here called We Were Birds....

sorry i was on spring break and couldn't read the updates till now
and they are really good.
i love how you write.

Tis a cool story. I like it
*subscribes*

even though this was short.
how you wrote it and everything i can just tell this story is going to be a good one.
i can't wait for more!
you seriously need to post another chapter up soon :]]