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  • Jessica;

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    Ahaha, that was a pretty good plan put in place by Ben.
    Except it took like 67457 minutes for Sharpie to figure it out.
    He better have asked Leah on a date!
    I was cracking up when Ben thought Mal was testing him.
    He would.
    More soon. <3
    January 26th, 2010 at 12:42am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Awwwwww! I love happy chapters where nothing bad happens and no one argues =)
    Seriously, though, I love that Ben and Mal are so sneaky, trying to get Patrick and Leah togther. And, all I have to say is Patrick better have manned up while in the car, and she better have invited him back into her place at the end.
    And, all the guys and the babies are so adorable. But, Ben sneaking back upstairs and taking care of them through the night absolutely takes the cake. So. Fucking. Cute.
    I love this, and I can't wait for more!
    January 25th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • saekuto

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    SNEAKY!! and burr made me lol my ass off!!! haha "and i dont even get to stay?" love it.
    ben is the cuttest thing ever :) thanks for updating!!
    January 25th, 2010 at 07:45pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    aww that one was so cute! ben was just amazingly cute and acted like such a good father <3
    lol at their sneakiness to get leah and sharpie together. so good!
    January 25th, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    January 25th, 2010 at 05:18pm
  • snowboarder79

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    Ben was so cute in this chapter =)
    I like nice Ben a lot better haha
    Seriously though it was so sweet of him to do that for Leah & Patrick, and then do what he did for Amalia.
    Loved the update, can't wait for more ! <3
    January 25th, 2010 at 01:48pm
  • mully17

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    awwww i love that!!! i am glad that her and ben are happy again!! and i loved the trick that ben did so patrick could get the girl!

    awesome don't wait so long to update
    January 25th, 2010 at 08:28am
  • roxy278

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    Ben has never been so prefect.
    Haha I love how it took Sharpie a while to figure out what was going on with the car situation.
    Loved it as usual! =] More soon!
    January 25th, 2010 at 08:22am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Oh my fucking god. Ben was so so so so perfect in this chapter from getting Leah and Sharpie together more to taking care of the baybehs to just being generally sweet and amazing to Amalia. Jesus fucking christ, woman. You were aiming to kill me, right? I'm SHO glad they worked things out, officially. Ben was really adorable in that regard. "I got used to sleeping next to you." SIGH. BIG SIGH. I love him so hard, and I want baybehs with him, but you know this.

    Adam and Ben bickering was also adorable. And hot. Heh. HEH.

    I can't wait for more, because you know how much I love this story. <33333

    Oh, and

    Skille, soon!
    January 25th, 2010 at 07:02am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    January 21st, 2010 at 12:27am
  • Rylie_

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    So, I liked it. As usual.

    Leah and Sharpie, yeah good couple. They need to get together.

    When Ben added 'Eager' to the end of Beau's name after getting yelled at, it made my heart melt. He is such a good dad to all those kids.

    Anywho, can't wait for more!!
    January 9th, 2010 at 06:37am
  • trashy cigarettes

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    ohhh i loved it as always
    :)
    i was excited when i seen this
    update!
    January 9th, 2010 at 05:08am
  • saekuto

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    “I’m not going to do anything. I just like to look. Nothing wrong with that.” lyss is the best!! hahah totally made me lol my life out!
    and ben is soo cute when he is jealous :O love it :3 thank you for the quick update!!
    January 9th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • Baby_Sevenfold

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    I think the last chapter was great, even though you think you got carried away. It was cute, especially when Ben corrected Beau last name. That was adorable.
    Love both updates!
    Can't wait for the next one, hopefully it won't take as long as the first one. But non the less still can't wait.
    And I also like how Sharpie was about finding if Leah had a boyfriends. So cute.
    January 8th, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • Jessica;

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    I loved this chapter...definitely one of my faves yet.
    I loved that Ben corrected Mal.
    I think that shows he's serious about his family.
    And OMG Beau, punching Hossa in the nuts...too funny.
    Definitely taking after his dad.
    And Ben is ridiculous thinking that anything was going on with Sharpie and Leah.
    So, those two need to get on that.
    More soon. <3
    January 8th, 2010 at 10:30pm
  • snowboarder79

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    I love happy times !
    Ben is so cute ... I thought it was adorable when he corrected Amalia on Beau's last name and how he was all paranoid about her and Sharpy.
    Overall a very sweet chapter. I like Ben a lot more when he acts nice haha
    More soon, <3
    January 8th, 2010 at 08:35pm
  • georgii

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    Haha, wow. You never fail to crack a smile.
    And I'm glad everything finally seem to be ok :)
    It IS ok, right?
    January 8th, 2010 at 07:40pm
  • silveringfinch

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    I love the whole thing about Hossa it was hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter as usual. :D
    January 8th, 2010 at 05:51pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    Oh wow, I just wanted to tell you that this chapter was pure brilliance. I just loved the Beu interaction with Hossa. Definitely can't wait for more :)
    January 8th, 2010 at 05:43pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    There were so, so, so many good parts and lines from this chapter!

    “So, Hossa is the one who’s here for twelve years and is basically the reason we couldn’t have Marty too, right?” Leah asked. My thoughts exactly! I MISS MARTY!!! And, a little off-topic, but I’m still going to say it anyway: when I was at the game, Marty was hanging around Sharpie and Seabs, just talking and stuff, and I melted. I miss him so much, and he needs to come backkkkk!

    Back to your story, though… “Oooh,” my son exclaimed. “You said a bad woooooord.” That’s exactly what my niece says. Only she adds a little in so it’s “Oooooh! You said a bad wooooord! Don’t say that!” haha.

    “Mommy he has a girl’s name,” Beau whirled around to face me, utterly confused. He swiftly turned back towards Marian. “Why would your mommy and daddy do that? They didn’t know you was a boy?” I seriously have tears in my eyes from laughing so hard (good thing I’m not at track practice this time, eh?)

    and just as I turned to look at Beau I saw him punch Marian in the crotch.
    “Beau Zachary Williams!” I scolded immediately, breaking away from my group and walking over to where Marian was adjusting himself.
    “I was just checkin’,” Beau shrugged as I grabbed his arm and pulled him toward me.
    And, this made me actually cry from laughing so hard. If he would have gotten away with it, Beau would have been my new hero =)

    And, Ben corrected her, telling her Beau’s last name was Eager! That is so freaking sweet!

    Oh, and Leah and Sharpie need to hook up. Now.

    This was hilarious, and I loved it. More soon!
    January 8th, 2010 at 03:58pm