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  • storyluver1143

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    keep on writing more!!! :) still loving it!!! :D
    June 25th, 2011 at 09:43am
  • Before . I . Fall

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    & i have been on this since April 22nd, it just never told me you commented? I don't know why or I would have answered you earlier.
    May 22nd, 2011 at 06:27pm
  • Before . I . Fall

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    yeah sure. i haven't been on this in forever & a while ago i was meaning to fix the story, re-write all the chapters & make a layout for it because all the layouts i tend to use don't work very well, but I've been way to busy with school and all this stuff coming up. So thanks I'd love for you to help me write this & yes I would add you as an author because it would be rude not to after you offered to help me.

    Thanks a lot.
    May 22nd, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    I'm not putting this in any way meanly... But grammar and descriptions could be better... Also layout... I can not read what the hell Alex is saying... White on white doesn't work...
    If you want Amy help on it I would be willing to help you re-write the chapters and make them a tad bit longer... Possibly make you a layout?
    But it's up to you to add me as an author...
    As I have seen you have multiple stories like me...
    And I would like to help you write it...
    So yeah it's not a bad plot either...
    April 22nd, 2011 at 03:14am
  • storyluver1143

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    oh snap! she just got him! keep on writing!!!
    November 15th, 2009 at 03:08am
  • storyluver1143

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    ummm... chapter 11 and 13 are the same......
    July 30th, 2009 at 11:32am
  • storyluver1143

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    zach is kindof bipolary.... WRITE MORE!
    June 22nd, 2009 at 11:55pm
  • Before . I . Fall

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    LoL ya! XD
    June 14th, 2009 at 10:35pm
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    YAY! FAMILY REUNION!
    June 14th, 2009 at 08:37pm
  • storyluver1143

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    OMG IM STARTING TO THINK THAT THE GUYS (ANDY, TREVOR, DRAKE, AND GREG) ARE THE ACTUAL PRINCES!!!!!
    May 18th, 2009 at 03:19am
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    storyluver1143:
    woah! IS ZACHARY HER BROTHER?!
    YEP!!! =) BIG SURPRISE HUH?!?!?!
    May 17th, 2009 at 03:03pm
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    woah! IS ZACHARY HER BROTHER?!
    May 17th, 2009 at 06:42am
  • storyluver1143

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    awww! i hope trevor feels EXTREMELY guilty about hurting her!!
    May 12th, 2009 at 10:32pm
  • iluvgospel4eva

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    I normally hate vampire stories because people keep writing them since twilight came out, but this is one of the cutest vampire stories I've read! It's so hilarious how they can hear every one's thoughts!! Update soon!!!
    May 11th, 2009 at 03:11pm
  • Kaiih

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    i read it.

    i liked it.

    please continue.

    *shakes hands*
    May 11th, 2009 at 02:26pm
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    storyluver1143:
    ooh! i like it!!! wait but is she like almightly species in that other world? or is she like a mix of them all?
    she's a mix but its stronger then everyone because they're all only one speacies or two. =) she's speacial lol
    May 11th, 2009 at 03:05am
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    ooh! i like it!!! wait but is she like almightly species in that other world? or is she like a mix of them all?
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:26am
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    storyluver1143:
    i really like how its coming along!!!
    oh and did yuou want me to change my post so that the idea isn't there?
    its fine! =) you dont need to change it.
    May 10th, 2009 at 03:05pm
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    i really like how its coming along!!!
    oh and did yuou want me to change my post so that the idea isn't there?
    May 10th, 2009 at 05:31am
  • Before . I . Fall

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    OMG YAYAYA I WAS THINKING OF SOMETHING LIKE THAT, TOO! IDK Y I ASK IF I ALREADY HAVE AN IDEA?!?!?! LoL I'm weird lyk dat!
    Thanks
    *Xandra///Katie*
    katieml2508@aim.com
    April 28th, 2009 at 02:13pm
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