So an amazing end to an amazing story! :) It was summed up perfectly. I wonder where Joe is taking Paige and I assume Deanna. And I think eventually Jaime will tell Joe. And Catherine and Kevin are just too cute! Overall, I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel. I hope you start it soon! I already have so many questions for the sequel its not even funny :D Fantastic Dani! Another great Dani story done! :D
Chapter 15 and 16; i had to shorten this because I basically wrote my comment already, but somehow I was signed out...I don't remember anything. I do remeber going on and on about how Joe and Jai are meant to be. Couples argue a lot, but i think in a way arguements are healthy...They broke up before, maybe, hopefully they'll get back together??
Okay, so Joe's one smart cookie. he just randomly cooked up the running away plan in his head right then and there...? and then he had a reason behind it? Wow haha. My question about this is. Is Paige going to grow up without knowing her biological Mom? And is Joe going to leave without hearing from Jai about being pregnant? I hope not. you seriously have me hooked! :)
Oh and I posted the first chapter of the Joe story Where you're the main character. Love, Reign Over Me<3
Chapter 13; Wow, Joe didn't know I was 15....jeez good thing I'm almost 16 right...? Okay but seriously. I feel like a homewrecker. I ruined Jai and Joe :( I hope not , i feel bad....or atleast my character would if she exsisted haha. I do agree with what she did because me, personally, if i was in that position I would never have it in me to get an abortion. I would take Joe's money and use it for needs for the baby. But I don't like it whenever Joe cries....feels weird to even write things like that...
Chapter 14; So, Nick was interested in Tiffany sinc they first met...wow. No wonder is was so hard on him. I hope they get back together dispite their defferences. I don't maybe Nick can be there for her through this whole ' I-was-pregnant-with-your-brothers-baby-thing'. Oh, yea I heard about the Trace and Demi thing too. Haha it made me laugh what Cat said, " Miley being a bitch?! Call the authorities!" Kevin and Catherine are too cute :) I love them together :) So, here's the question(s). Who called? And where's I go? ahah taht seems so weird saying it like that....
Okay so I'm sorry for missing out on a bunch of chapters, these comments are making up for that. Oh and there's on more comment left :)
question...didnt Deanna have more than 1 sister...what happened to them? uh ohh...what if Joe runs away with Deanna and Jamie is pregnant?! cant wait to see what happens!
OH MY FUCKING GOBSTOPPERS!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!! NOW!!!
How can you leave this at a cliffhanger!? I need to know who's pregnant and who's not! I would really really REALLY like to have Kevin's kid, but is it me? Part of me says no cuz it wouldn't really have any drama linked to it, but the other part says yes cuz, HELLOOO it's me and Kevin...that would be freaking awesome! I cannot CANNOT believe that Joe ran away with Deanna, just leaving Paige behind. Maybe the baby I was hinting to Kevin at was Paige. Maybe I know that Joe has run off and left her to me and Kevin. Oh God! I just need this epilogue like now! Go! Write it! Haha! I'm so demanding, but you're leaving me hanging here. That's not fair!
Wow. That was intense. I can't believe that Ian killed her sister...and raped her as well. That's just awful. I know that Deanna can't be doing too well. I mean she just killed another person. That's really gonna wear her down. I'm glad that Joe explained everything to me and that i actually listened :) And Jaime being there when they returned...HUGE. Reading Joe watching her you can tell he loves her more than anything. I'm glad she's giving him 5 minutes to explain himself. And I'm not fully sold on my theory of Paige. I hope she's not Joe's, but then what is he gonna do with her? He can't just leave her. He already loves her way too much to do that. Update soon! (even though have updated twice in the last 24 hours :P Yuo're on a roll!)
wow...definitely a lot of things going on in that chapter poor Deanna...and then she kissed Joe and he pushed her away...that must have made her feel even worse! cant wait to see what he's gonna say to Jamie!