okay so before i read the second chapter you put up, i have to tell you that the first chapter was... amazingly well written. It left me pretty much speechless and wanting to read more. I like how you connected both of their stories, set up great imagery, and ulitmately pulled me in. for someone who says english is their second language, I wouldn't even think of it if you hadn't written it in the bottom notes. amazing, and I can't wait to read more. <3
It left me pretty much speechless and wanting to read more. I like how you connected both of their stories, set up great imagery, and ulitmately pulled me in.
for someone who says english is their second language, I wouldn't even think of it if you hadn't written it in the bottom notes.
amazing, and I can't wait to read more.
<3