An amazing story! I wonder what'll happen i know it's bad i kinda want alanna to die weirdly or end in a coma or something. it's make it unbarible for the sequal (which you should make) L.
I hope her meeting with Will goes calmly and she can't get rid of him from messing up her life up anymore. I really hope she comes out alive..awe that so sweet that her and Brian are now engaged :) I didn't know that she once has dated Dimitri..that was interesting to find out. Great update :)