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  • em.anderson2009

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    This story rocks please post again soon
    May 11th, 2009 at 10:39am
  • em.anderson2009

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    u said 10 so here goes.
    I totally love this story. Post more soon!
    May 11th, 2009 at 10:38am
  • Lovable Lie

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    ily ily ily ily!
    May 11th, 2009 at 05:16am
  • Eden.

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    Ah again my fault and you punish the world . . .
    WHY WHY WHY *screams falling down*

    Well as I said before it is shocking that she has kids did Jasper and she like um . . .well yeah . . . wait that isn't possible she never knew he was alive until now but . . . could it be?
    May 11th, 2009 at 02:53am
  • Tambry

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    how did she have kids! are they jaspers or whos? and im not crazy ms. emmett cullen ,ok mabye slightly! but that doesnt matter keep it up or else!
    May 11th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • WordsOfTheWorld

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    I do not see the point in DEMANDING comments in return for updates. You write because you enjoy to write not because you have the approval of others. The number of readers and subscribers should be enough. Comments are nothing but opinions that do not really effect the writing process at all unless its a suggestion. And I have one stop demanding because it just annoyes people.
    May 10th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • em.anderson2009

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    Love this, please post more when u have time, which i hope is soon!!
    May 10th, 2009 at 04:15pm
  • Eden.

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    Oh my gosh - her kids!!
    :Oface!!
    May 7th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • Eden.

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    Tambry:
    O MY FUCKING GOD!!!! that was the best story based off of jasper ive ever read ( this being the first one ) U haft to update soon or i might go crazy so PLZ update soon!
    yes what the slightly cray girl said. . . :P
    I will have the chap as soon as the final draft is editied so maybe monday after noon at the latest.

    UP DATE SOON!!!
    April 12th, 2009 at 09:14pm
  • Tambry

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    O MY FUCKING GOD!!!! that was the best story based off of jasper ive ever read ( this being the first one ) U haft to update soon or i might go crazy so PLZ update soon!
    April 12th, 2009 at 01:04pm
  • Eden.

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    Uh huh . . . .

    OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!
    Shelby you are like the best writer ever!!!
    Cute guitar name - *snickers*
    and how you ended again - OMG!!!
    it took just one word and I fell out of my chair!! literally.
    Oh and are you trying to kill me - YES Bangin
    I'll have it done as soon as possible
    It takes a long LONG time to edit someting that was really well woven and kinda R- rated
    But Any ways
    POST SOMEMORE!!
    I NEED MORE!!!!
    April 11th, 2009 at 08:09am
  • Eden.

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    If only you could she my face right now- boy would you be shocked :brightside: :cute: :cheese: Wow Wow Swoon

    It would be a combo of those!!
    MY GOD SHELBS!!!!!
    I LUV IT!!!!
    HE IS SO PRETTY *SIGH* In Love In Love
    I must know how you do it oh great one !!! Hail Hail Hail Hail Hail
    I . . .
    Need . . . . .
    MORE!! *subscribes*
    Please please keep me updated :)
    April 9th, 2009 at 07:35am
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