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AMAZING STORY THAT KICKS MONKEY BALLS!!!! LOL YOU TWO ARE GREAT KEEP IT COMING...

the story is AWESOME you guys!
Keep it up!
Subscribed already! =D

:D This chapter was delicious
Loved the fact that it didn't take years to update again. >.> -hintmaybeyouguysshoulddoitlikethismoreoftenhinthint-

Oo, another chapter. Yay.

One thing I noticed:
Nothing but dust and reckage was visible inside the tiny apartment room, throw in some dried blood from ages ago, and a fresh corpse. The stench of death was in the air, stronger than usual. Mixed with the musty air and the dust floating about, it was unpleasent to say the least.
These sentences didn't seem to flow very well to me. It seemed kind of awkward to read.

And the end! Gasp, I'm excited. xD

i love this, and i love you.

I lol'd as the gun was pulled and put to the guy's temple although that is just me.

And, these chapters are really spaced out (dislike) but they are very well written and lengthy(like) so I suppose the timing is cancelled out by the length of them.
That's all I can really say. It's a great story and I'm waiting for more.

Well, despite the fact that I'm not one for zombie stories, I like this one.

I like the characters. For some reason I like Victor. Er, I like the way he is in the story I guess. I don't really like him, but I do. That made no sense.

Anyways, one thing I found:
Did I think of him as him nice? The thoughts coursed through her subconscious as she reviewed the evaluations.
I'm assuming that the second him in the first sentence isn't supposed to be there?

But other than that it's good. (:

love it <3 like i am legend but more sophsicated :) and no i don't care how i failed at spelling that :)

Ergh, guys, I'm sorry.
I've tried, and tried again, to read this.
I can tell that it's well written.
It's got a good plot line.
The authors are two of my best mates.
You've made it entertaining, but still serious at times. You've balanced well and created a good story.
But I cannot for the fucking life of me read it. It's just not my thing. Seriously, Aaron, this is like the opposite to the oneshot I wrote. That oneshot is my type of thing. This is not. I just can't read it. I'm sorry. Really, I am.
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COMMENT.

I win.

Hmm, that was something, though I belived i liked it. It might have been a bit long but it was still entertaining, there were some parts that made me smile and a few that made me laugh so all in all you did a good job. I cant say a can complain to any of it. well done boys.

Extremely well written. Great job, you guys. I can't wait to hear more!
You know you've hit my soft spot when you mention zombies. Keep it up. (:

It was good and funny, gotta have the humor! I enjoyed reading about Mary, I like her, awesome personality, and hot?o: No way!XD I'm wondering how her new roommate will work out. God, and having a guy as a roommate that you hardly know, AND that went to prison...poor Mary.DX Can't wait to read what happens next.o:

I like it.
And… *takes a deep breath*…
ITHINKYOUSHOULDPOSTALLTHECHAPTERSUPNOWBECAUSEIDON’TWANTTOWAITANYLONGER!
Seriously this is fascinating.
You can’t get better than a zombie story.
A well written, enticing zombie story at that.
I could go into a full blown analysis, but I’ll save that till you’re finished and when I'm more awake.
:)

Long wait, great chapter.
<3 Can't wait for more, guys.

awesome thus far.......even if zombies are hella scary to me.......and 2/3 of what you put up freaked me out......still great guys.
:D
M.Lynne

“Don't let the zombies bite."

...Now this is more like my kind of story!! :D

Cool! Zombies! I'm so subscribing.

That's good, I like it, Aaron.
And zombie nut, can't forget you.
I liked the first actual chapter the best, damn she's got mad skills. I'd... hurt someone... to have fighting abilities like that.
Loved the "ripped apart like a Mr. Potato Head" part. It made me laugh.
Keep it up guys. <3

OMFG THAT WAS GOOD>