Brontophobia. - Comments

First of all the layout was totally cute :cute:
But more importantly I loved how adorable the story was too.
To add to the pathetic fallacy of reading this, there's a hugee thunder storm going on while I was reading it. Which completely drew me in as I'm sitting shivering under the covers.
I love how Ashley conquered his fear, it was so well done.

I love that he conquered his fear.
And the way that Jarred was so worried about him. <33
It's like being outside during a storm, something that he's been so afraid of all his life, gives him a sense of...power, almost.
I really liked it. Brlliant. =)

That was adorable!
I love how instead of making the character succumb to his fear, he conquered it. Great job & good luck :]

I thought it was so cute! :cute:

I love it when people resolve their fears. Good luck on the contest!

Awww I agree with shut your mouth; the ending was quite adorable.
I loved the whole story, it was awesome.

awww the ending was completely adorable.
I love how he conquered his fear.