You Gotta Smile Sometimes - Comments

  • the god of thunder.

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    I have one request for you to make this an easier thing to read. First, if you wouldn't mind breaking your story down into paragraphs, that'd be awesome, because the big lumps like that give me a headache. .____. And two, the layout made me have to switch to default. Just saying in case it affects anybody else in the same way, ^^;;; but as to cut off my negativity, the story ideas and such are just as good as they always turn out to be.

    I leaned forward again and started telling her my plan. "basically, you tell your mother in the most apologetic way possible that you want the counseling, you offer to drive yourself there from now on so that she can have a rest, you ring up and cancel the sessions, then you pretend to go and you can go shopping or whatever or come and visit me. Plus you can spend the money she gives you to pay for the counseling sessions." I sat back as she stared at me.

    Dude. That is an awesome plan. He seems to have every little detail planned out and it could completely work. They just need to be very careful. Like, what is the mom decides to ask the counselor how she's doing or something, or say somebody is around them who the mom talks to and announces that she was there. Dx For serious. That'd be bad.
    February 5th, 2008 at 07:06pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    I love Felix. < 3
    November 5th, 2007 at 10:36pm
  • Becci's_Back

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    woot woot, awesome update, as per usual...
    loved it!!!
    *snuggles you.*
    xxx
    October 12th, 2007 at 01:26am
  • the god of thunder.

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    Haha I love art class. So i don't blame him for getting so excited over the afternoon class =]

    Update soon *slaps bert again*
    October 9th, 2007 at 05:29am
  • Becci's_Back

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    *hits bert* NOW look whatcha made me do bert! i hit you! even though i find you great. hmph.

    seriously mikey and kitkat need to get together!!!!
    more soon honey!
    xxx
    August 15th, 2007 at 09:20pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    aw,don't call them fags, Bert, please don't turn so homophobic on me. I'd slap you too, despite how much I love you
    but other than that, it was an amazing update, I love the story with my writer's heart, and I'm looking forward to more.
    August 14th, 2007 at 08:42am
  • the god of thunder.

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    lol That chapter cracked me up, you have a new subscriber
    August 1st, 2007 at 03:56am
  • Killslay-Steelclaw

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    awesome update.

    really good, i laughed at the gerard and needle thing lol

    more soon!!!!?

    xxx
    hee hee Gee is funny. we love him.
    August 1st, 2007 at 03:21am
  • Becci's_Back

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    awesome update.

    really good, i laughed at the gerard and needle thing lol

    more soon!!!!?

    xxx
    August 1st, 2007 at 03:03am
  • Becci's_Back

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    loved the update.
    *hugs kit-kat*
    *sniffle*
    more soon?

    wait was she like totally naked all the way through, like the ride to the station and at the station?

    please update!
    July 31st, 2007 at 01:51am
  • Becci's_Back

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    i like it !!!!!!

    update soon?
    please?
    x
    July 26th, 2007 at 11:37pm
  • mini_spork

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    i think that in the part of kathrin you were looking (almoust... yeap cause i never meet mikey) at my life!

    keep going! update soon
    July 10th, 2007 at 04:57am