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  • xBlaqkxRosex

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    O_O That was fantastic... You will be published. Definitely.
    July 8th, 2009 at 11:15pm
  • Shelby Welby

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    This was absolutly amazing love.

    you are very good at what you do!

    BUTTTTTTTTTTT i didn't want them to die. *tears*

    it's okay though, i know they live :) hehehe
    April 12th, 2009 at 03:20pm
  • petalhee.

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    That was beautifully written, Molly. Very descriptive and the flow feels natural. It doesn't jump around. It's like a formed puzzle, every piece is connected to each other perfectly. And the last parts made me choke up. Heartbreaking and sad, but the beauty of unconditional love shone through. :]
    April 10th, 2009 at 02:24pm
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