Teehee SWINE FLU costume now that's cool. I guess I'll be the only one to say this but Bills name is Awesome! I likes Bill and Tom's costume and the haunted house. Epic Fail for Tom!! LOL!!!
I loved it! I saw a baby spartan, a baby tigger, and a baby elaphant! And there was this teen dressed up like a marshmellow thing, that marshmellow paste logo along with marshmellows on his shirt! And there was this girl that was headless and carrying her own head! It was feckin' awsome!!!
I just found your story, and i love it. absolutely love it. I like your writing style, very descriptive but non-droning. You've managed to put Tom and Bill into completely different personalities than i've ever seen in FanFic before but it's still totally beleiveable. Can't wait for more :)
Sorry for not commenting earlier!, I didn't have time!. Anyways!, I can soo see Tom wearing that!. It suits him so well!. The way the hat would be on his head and then the suit and the accessories that go with it!, guh, he needs to dress up like that for halloween!. In real life. He would so fit the category perfectly!, all he would need are to girls by his side. That shouldn't be a problem for him, though.
ok i absolutely love this storyy!!! my current fave story im reading :) sorry i dont get to comment often but i usually read through a crappy phone so i cant comment but your writing is amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter!
Bill can be such a dork, but he is the awesomest pimp ever! I like him alot in this chapter!! Tom hiding in the bathroom from his dad is one funny image in my head. Yay Cloudy with a chance of meatballs movie!!!