I'm in sort of in a hurry now, and I'll have to do this really quickly, but know that this deserves a much better comment from me, and I'll write one, really. :shifty
Okay, so I really like this. I like the whole idea of the plot, I have the feeling you can pull this off in a very extraordinary way, and I'm not just saying that because I've actually read your work before, way before when I was new on the site. Yeah, you got me into Frerard. But I'm sidetracking.
Your writing style never feels 'heavy' or that the chapters sort of drag on and on, I feel eager at the end of each one to find out what's going to happen next. With all these killings and Gerard coming home at the same time...
Okay, so I really like this. I like the whole idea of the plot, I have the feeling you can pull this off in a very extraordinary way, and I'm not just saying that because I've actually read your work before, way before when I was new on the site.
Yeah, you got me into Frerard. But I'm sidetracking.
Your writing style never feels 'heavy' or that the chapters sort of drag on and on, I feel eager at the end of each one to find out what's going to happen next. With all these killings and Gerard coming home at the same time...
I'm definitely following this.