Autumn Remembrance - Comments

I liked the filler. It told me in more depth what kind of attitude and emotion Bryson had. I liked it. good job.

Waw, you're a really amazing writer ;D!

wow. Derek. I never knew you could write liek this.
positive:
your description lgihts me on fire. Holy guacomole. its great. I love how you write the characters feelings so spectacularly that I feel them as I am reading. It sokay if chapters are short, because they are well written. James Patterson's chapters are usually a page and a half. so its alright.

negative:
you have some typos int here, I don't remeber where, but when you update i'll find them so your story can be perfect.

more positive:
I love how Bryson sees no faces... and Alice. love the name by the way. and what else... i look for an update an dim subscribing. you are truly talented. oh yes, and the Hollywood love and the genuine love. greatness.

fantabulous Derek.
-bexy

Can't wait for the next part =)

<3 !!!!

So here you go :)

And you deserve more comments than this

More greatness, yay! :D
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Can't wait to read more beautiful details.
The part about his grief was fantastic!

It's a very descriptive tale. I felt like I was the cameraman there XP
Chapter 3 is the best so far in my opinion. LOVE the description about death. <3
Thanks for inspiring me :D