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  • Zachary Merrick.

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    I liked how you gave a reason for the fear.
    And I love how she was so optimistic about facing her fear, it feels like she will conquer it eventually, like See. said.
    April 14th, 2009 at 10:13am
  • See.

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    Yeah, I loved that you gave a reason for the fear. Sometimes, there isn't one, but I liked that there was.
    And I loved how it gave an overall optimistic outlook on it. It made me feel that she would conquer the fear eventually, even if it took a while.
    April 14th, 2009 at 02:34am
  • Springsteen.

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    I don't know why I found this kind of funny. Maybe it's because I've got two cats and neither of them are threatening in the least. But I know this is a valid fear, and I liked the fact that you backed it up with a valid reason. It was well written and easy to read. Good luck!
    April 14th, 2009 at 02:24am
  • modern mariah.

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    It helps that you added why she was scared of cats, and it was cute that even though she's 15 her dad still tucks her into bed.
    April 11th, 2009 at 10:10pm
  • stay gone;

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    I like how this is different from all the others.
    I wrote a oneshot labout this fear a long time ago, but I like yours better...
    good luck!
    April 11th, 2009 at 05:47pm
  • sectumsempra

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    Oh, I liked how this fear had a rational explaination besides 'one day this person woke up and was afraid of cats'. I liked how you told the story, and I liked her dad. He was pretty cool. :tehe:

    All in all, it was pretty good, darling. Good luck with the contest! :cute:
    April 11th, 2009 at 09:53am