Ok I just started reading this tonight and I flew through it. I have to say I really adore it. So rarely do I find fic these days that just pull me in right off the jump. Really well done. Please update soon, this is fantastic.
I don't know why that chapter wasn't one of your favorites, I really liked it!
I think it was a good idea to put in there about her old boyfriends. It gives us some background as to why she acts the way she does, and why she would take up the offer to pretend to be Jon's fiancee.
And, I'm glad she finally told Jon how she felt. But, I'm a little scared to see how he's going to react now, and I want to know if they're going to continue to pretend about being engaged!
So, I just started reading this, and I have to say it is absolutely amazing! Seriously, I am already addicted to this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!