Under Here - Comments

It was really good; if a little creepy. Sorry, I don't get all the symbolism, but it reminds me of a poem by Robert Browning, called Porphyria's Lover.
Amazing writing. You definitely have a gift.

I AM CRYING NOW - speechless is the understatement of the century! You've made Death seem so beautiful. *sighs deeply*

The Way:

I'm speechless.

It was so beautifully described, every perfect, heartrending moment and every ounce of emotion and pain and love, coursing through the most intricate words...

It all just seemed so vague and blurry, just like being underwater, with the sun shining like a glimpse of eternity. I cannot tell you how well-written this is.

I wish I could quote from this. But I can't. The whole thing is just too... WOW.

The song fit it like a dream. I have no criticism at all.

You really must write more. You're fan.tas.tic.

Couldn't say it better myself.. :shock:

Oh dear Borris this one-shot is truely wonderful.
I love how your discribed her love, it was beautiful. I really liked the last paragraph before the endind of the song, the way you described her death as becoming part of earth was so well-written.
I'm hoping maybe, just maybe you might write again soon, you are a brillant writer and I adore your one-shots.
Love electrically,
Katie.

i agree with The Way. i actually couldn't say it any better.
its wonderful!
write more, please =]

I'm speechless.

It was so beautifully described, every perfect, heartrending moment and every ounce of emotion and pain and love, coursing through the most intricate words...

It all just seemed so vague and blurry, just like being underwater, with the sun shining like a glimpse of eternity. I cannot tell you how well-written this is.

I wish I could quote from this. But I can't. The whole thing is just too... WOW.

The song fit it like a dream. I have no criticism at all.

You really must write more. You're fan.tas.tic.