Really I love your story. You know how to surprise me, each time I think the story will flow one way, it doesn't. Keep up the good-no, great work! I can't wait for the next chapter. ^-^
Well that isnt such a bad way to take someones soul by kissing them, lets just hope that she hasnt got to go round kissing any skanky murderous rapists because I dont think she would be too pleased if that happened. Still your number one fan lol! But I'm pretty sure other are claming the fan spot inside their head too :) Your an amazing writer, keep it up x