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  • somethingorother

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    Okay I finally have some time to comment on some chapters! I should be studying but reading this again is way more exciting.

    And I know you finished the story already but I'll comment anyways. I love how you made Andy fall for Jack but still have self-doubt (in a good way).

    And you have definately made me like All Time Low more. To be honest, I only kinda liked them but now I'm in to them. And I just realized Jack is such a cutie!!
    September 26th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • doyleangel

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    Hello hello hello. Finally finished reading it. I got side-tracked cause I was in Dallas Wednesday seeing Blink 182 (with AAR and FOB). But I'm back and have finished the story.

    And WHAT a story. Wow I loved the whole thing. I agree that I like how it ended, with things kinda open, but not, you have hope for Jack and Andy and can think whatever you want.

    HOWEVER, I would totally love a sequel or a "happily ever after" epilouge or something lol. i'm just saying, if you decide to write one, I'm all over it :-)
    September 25th, 2009 at 09:21pm
  • lindsaiirose

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    haii, i'm a douche.
    >_<
    I so have no been recieving updates, lawl.
    But anyway, awhh, I love this story so much!
    I wouldn't mind a squeal, but I enjoy how you ended it!
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    xoxo.
    September 25th, 2009 at 01:41am
  • Divide the Joy

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    wow I wasn't expecting that to be the ending. But now I won't have to worry about them breaking up so kudos.
    September 23rd, 2009 at 07:47pm
  • punkrockromance

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    Goodness I can't believe it's over. I was so shocked yesterday when I read it, I had to think over what I wanted to say.

    Ultimately, I think it's good you ended it how you did. You know how they always face that dilema in TV shows when the kids go to college and the show gets boring. Wouldn't want that to happen in this case. So the reader can kind of envision how things play out.

    You are a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what happens with Decisions, Decisions!

    I really hope you are majoring in English :)
    September 23rd, 2009 at 05:10am
  • mcrluver-92

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    ok, so i know you said that you dont wanna do a sequel, but you also said that you are considering it. sooo...i was thinking that maybe i could help influence you towards the sequel. pretty please. oh ya, I FRIGGIN LOVED THIS STORY!
    September 22nd, 2009 at 07:17am
  • Distracted Student

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    ahh i'm going to miss jack and andy! this is an amazing story and i'm really going to miss opening my email and finding a notification! you're an amazing writer!
    September 22nd, 2009 at 06:57am
  • samantha sometimes

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    oh my god i just might cry.
    when i read the authors note, my eyes literally bugged out.
    like this.
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    that cant be the end, that was my favorite story on mibba.
    sequel please?
    with sugar on top and atl strapped to your bed?
    September 22nd, 2009 at 05:40am
  • nopejustnope

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    jkdlsel'l'eifi;
    what are you supposed to say after this ends?

    shitting butterflies once again...

    my god. it's like a movie that you just want to have keep going and going and going.
    the selfish part of me wants a sequal but at the same time i feel kind of comforted with this ending you know? i'm not making any sense am i?

    you created the perfect imperfect couple. thanks now noone's going to be able to live up to that. all joking aside this was amaaazing.

    and i thank you for that :)
    September 22nd, 2009 at 04:49am
  • strawberrybubble

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    PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL.

    jack and andy are my favorite couple you cain't jus leave me hangin lyk that PLEASE and thank you♄
    September 22nd, 2009 at 04:27am
  • escapethekait26

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    it's over!! and what a beautiful ending!!!!!

    i love jack sooo much in this chapter! made my want to jump in the stroy, hug him and andy, and jump out!!

    twas an amazing story m'dear! loved it very much!!

    now get to work on DD!

    xoxo
    ~k~
    September 22nd, 2009 at 02:03am
  • foreverjanelle

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    This was great. I actually don't want a sequel, that's how well it ended. It's not necessary.
    September 22nd, 2009 at 12:56am
  • xcabaretlove

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    i'm really sad this is over. but i think that's like the perfect ending.
    and im not gonna lie, i'm hoping you'll change your mind about the sequel <3
    September 22nd, 2009 at 12:29am
  • kaitlinnelaine

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    This story was amazing and you're amazing. I cried about fifty times reading this story and that's good because that means you wrote it good :D
    I'm not glad it's over but I don't think you should do a sequel for the sames reasons. The ending was great, and sweet, and poignant and I'm super super proud of you, even though idk you. <3
    September 21st, 2009 at 11:35pm
  • love like this.

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    OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH. One of the best stories I have read ever, swear to God. I honestly don't think there should be a sequel, this ended perfectly.
    September 21st, 2009 at 10:56pm
  • running from lions

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    kudos =)
    i agree with you on the sequel thing- you picked a nice way to end it, nothing leftover,
    everything ahead
    so i won't hate you if you don't make jv#2
    September 21st, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • Living Alive

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    awwww this was super sweet :)
    September 21st, 2009 at 04:56pm
  • ashlynlol

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    n ya.. am proud that u made Barakat super strong at the very end where he held his tears for Andrea.. n the whole don look back part just stings a little..
    September 21st, 2009 at 10:46am
  • ashlynlol

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    ya, ur right.. sometimes stories should just end with a barely there ending... just two people insanely in love.. love the ending.. will forever remember Jamais Vu.. and of course, its signature Barakat sweet momentos.. once again, congratz... this is the one story that kept up with its sweetness no matter what.. superb...
    September 21st, 2009 at 10:45am
  • YourFavoriteMistake

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    I got really sad knowing this was over, but really happy that you nailed the ending. Yay =)
    September 21st, 2009 at 08:14am