Afterglow - Comments

  • you're a star

    you're a star (100)

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    Awww.

    .. Only thing that comes to mind, sorry. :tehe:
    This was adorable!!
    May 25th, 2009 at 01:43am
  • Siriano;

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    AAAHHH! :XD
    Damn the cuteness!
    Damn it.
    May 24th, 2009 at 01:36am
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    *fangirl SQUEE*

    My favourite part:

    Kris glances up and shocks him a bit; anger doesn’t suit him either. “I’m not a girl.”

    Adam pulls their hips together. “You sure?”

    “You’re terrible,” Kris groans, putting up no resistance.
    May 23rd, 2009 at 06:14pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    This is the first Kradam I've read...there aren't many on the site.

    Wow. You made me glad for this to have been the first Kradam I've read. I loved it a lot. I liked the occasional humor, the layout, the soft tone used...it was amazing.
    May 22nd, 2009 at 10:39pm
  • the endless.

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    Oh my god, so fucking adorable.
    I don't have any words. I just loved it. In Love
    May 19th, 2009 at 03:13am
  • Heart Attack Machine

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    :cheese:
    ^Totally appropriate smiley, right there. Srsly.
    That was so so good! You write very well, good job!
    I'm not one for reviews, so I'll just leave it at "that was one of the best things I've read in a while."
    May 18th, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • silly ann murphy

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    When Zero told me you wrote a Kradam, I immediately clicked your stories page to look for it. I was going to leave a nice, long review, but IDK... I can't. I'd squeal and flail all over.

    That was cute.

    You made me very happy.
    That made me incredibly happy.

    Just.
    Wow.

    In Love
    May 18th, 2009 at 05:44am
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    That was sweet. And funny. And I groaned when it stopped. Hm...I guess I don't actually have that much to say. And its kind of like OF to me and it works. It works really well.
    April 18th, 2009 at 08:48pm
  • ghuleh.

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    Wow.
    Just, wow.
    That was amazing. :]
    April 16th, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • Tom Fletcher.

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    Cutest. Thing. Ever. In Love

    Thanks for like, not letting anyone else have a chance at winning the contest :finger:
    I jest, I jest. :tehe:

    :arms: Ah luff the Adamness. :weird
    April 15th, 2009 at 04:08pm
  • roe.

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    Oh God, I loved this. It was a little too fluffy for my taste, but you pulled the fluffiness of it off ... if that makes sense.

    The answer isn’t genius, but it’s true. “The usual reasons, I guess. I like you, and you’re cute.”

    “Girls are cute.”

    “They’re not my preference,” he nearly laughs. “You are.”

    Kris glances up and shocks him a bit; anger doesn’t suit him either. “I’m not a girl.”

    Adam pulls their hips together. “You sure?”


    So, so, so cute in my opinion. I love the twist of humor in it too. In Love
    April 14th, 2009 at 11:34pm