I Won't Call This Hell - Comments

John sex... -blink-
I'm not quite ready for that...First Maine fanfic! I'm quite proud of myself. But this is amazing, and I couldn't have chosen a better one to read. It's witty and funny and descriptive and sarcastic and...well, John doesn't make any sense.
That's a very, very, very good story in my opinion. :D

Oi, I'm going to be blunt here.
Are we going to get John sex?
Uhuh. -wiggles eyebrows-

nom nom nom...
john really says things like that?
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Loved how she was upset John was the singer<3

i loooove it!

oooh, I'm so excited for the rest!
Your story is really well-written and the flow of it is great :D

oh! i feel it about to get hot in this bitch.

I agree with the comments above. Haha.

me tooo i cant wait to see what happens between her and john!!!! :D

i like :D
i wonder whats gonna happen at the show ;)

that sucks for her.
moving back w/ the famz.

Lyn is a good character :]
I like that she's an artist :D

Witty Lyn is witty :D I love this story. It sounds like it's gonna be really interesting :]

that was defin. good dear :)
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sounds great so far! can't wait to read more!

the first one was great!
haha i believe you can continue
even with the other stories you have :D

mmm i'll definetly read the next chapter :)
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I liked the first chapter :D
I don't doubt the next update will be good, too :]

Lolz at the first comment: "I like 'em fiesty." haha. (:

Great start, I like how you didn't make the girl fall head over heels in love with him the first time they met.

Can't wait for the update. (:

ohh.
I like em' feisty.