My English Tutor Warrick. - Comments

this is probably my favorite story on mibba right now I absolutely love it!!
No seriously if it wasn't illegal i would probably marry your story
THX 4 UPDATING!!!

update like... now please =D

Your story is totally great!! But what I love even more is how fast you update! THX for catering to those of us who are impatient!

i have to say, i am canadian, and there are lumberjacks in the US. LOL.
cute, still love it. =). nice twist. =).

Now Warrick is the stupid one. :(
They're both stupid.
They make me sad.

I hope they don't stay with them. I just want them to be alone together for once, there's always someone interupting :(

Yipeee!
Road trip ;)
Can't wait!!!
Update soon pretty pleaseee!
<3

And, I <3 Kaleb && Warrick
=D =]

OMG! ROADTRIP!!!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!

loove this story. =). i love warrick and kaleb, so cute. =).
you have another subscriber. <3.
( tabby's adorable. ^^ )

What the heck!
I'm want to set Kaleb on fire like a charcoal briquet!
Sorry, that's really violent but...AGH!
He's so stupid, Warrick loves him! Why can't he just dump that stupid nasty bitch and love him too?!?!
I appreciate you updating so much and I hope that doesn't stop!
I love this story, but I hate the fact that Kaleb is with this BITCH and kissed her! Now she thinks he's actually into her more than she thought before. :'[
Poor Warrick, how could he do that to him? He won him a scooby doooooo how could he do that? Poor baby. v.v
And he told him he loves him! What the hell is wrong with Kaleb?!
Okay, sorry for sounding so psychotic in this comment.
I'm not, really. :>
I just love this story and and and I'm not afraid to admit that I'm an obsessive fan girl.

No.
he did NOT just kiss Ariel! :O
'kay, I'm gonna speak for myself here:
Please, do not delete this story!!! I <3 it, and I want Warrick and Kaleb to really honestly have a relationship! *puppy dog eyes*
Continue!!!!

btw: Ariel is a bitch, and she needs to go die =]

of course the story is still good D:

it's pretty interesting,
and i cant wait to see what happens now !

other ppl seems to like it too,
so you should definitely continue !

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Dont worry its still a good story!!
Theyre just..yeah.. Its such a great
story dont stop writing it =D

Hi there.

Cute story, but it has some issues.

First, you should have better spacing. Double spacing, like how I'm doing now with my comment.

I know it's a pain, but if you don't do that your story might get deleted. Not good.

At times, some of your wording is a tad iffy, as well.

Also, I'm a little skeptical of your protagonist's character. I don't know, the girlyness seems to be kind of pushed. Granted, I didn't read the whole thing, but that's how I felt. Then again, maybe you're going for that.

Otherwise, you have some interesting characters going on here, and it's a change from the usual fan fictions.

Just fix the spacing, because you don't want your story deleted.

Otherwise, keep on writing!
Bee.

Yes, this is a good story! It's great!
Oh my God, I'm going to die, update now!
He better not kiss her, he better not kiss her! Ahh!
Kaleb and Warrick need to get together now and let that bitch know she's garbage! Ahhhh!! Update! I love you! I'm going to murder Ariel if he kisses her! Ahh! I know I sound crazy, I don't care!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wonderless:

I was happy to see that you updated. :D
Keep writing, I love it.
I love watching their relationship progress, and I need to see that stupid bitch Ariel get curbstomped or something.

I agree with everything.

Ariel needs to get ghetto stomped.
Then whipped.
then cut up saw style.
NO.
Get her head blown up.
:3

Please continue, I loveee this story.

I was happy to see that you updated. :D
Keep writing, I love it.
I love watching their relationship progress, and I need to see that stupid bitch Ariel get curbstomped or something.

awww i love this story, i always come online just to see if you updated haha! lame i know but its too good lol
x

Yayyy! You updated again! =]
Ariel irks me :[
haha.
But, I loooove Kaleb and Warrick. <3

Update again, soon! =D