Breaking Their Hold - Comments

  • rockstarsNredpants

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    oh wow! I see how it is. I stay off the computer for a few days, and all of my favourite stories get updated. hmmm. Well, I loved the whole awkward debate between Gates and Mr.Doyle, I found it very humourous ... just sayin, oh how I love this story. :)
    November 30th, 2009 at 05:21am
  • secrets-that-die

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    loved the update
    <33
    November 30th, 2009 at 12:31am
  • sourwolf.

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    Gates makes me laugh! (:
    I loved this chapter.

    update soon, please! =D
    November 28th, 2009 at 08:31pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I loved it. Brian made me laugh so hard. I loved the Syn and Doyle debate. :)
    November 28th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    Brian is so funny, and you know, it's always nice to hear a friend say your teacher is a pedophile. Oh, and also has the hots for you! Lolz!
    November 28th, 2009 at 07:12pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    hahaha oh brian... ithiink this chapter proves why i loves him!
    aww i feel bad for Johnny! you can tell hes trying!
    loved the update!
    November 28th, 2009 at 06:38pm
  • BrickByBoringBrick-

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    I love this
    Carry on :D
    <3 <3
    November 28th, 2009 at 05:54pm
  • punkstar102

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    update update update!!! i love reading this story it entertains me. lol
    XD
    November 28th, 2009 at 05:48pm
  • sTeLLaRxFRESH

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    Mr. Doyle and Syn cracked me up.
    I can totally see Brian doing that.
    November 28th, 2009 at 05:10pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    loved the update
    <33
    November 27th, 2009 at 10:54pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    gosh this is so bipolar!! hahaha
    but i love it!
    more soon!
    November 27th, 2009 at 05:31pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    Damn! Her and her temper! Amazing update!
    November 27th, 2009 at 08:14am
  • sTeLLaRxFRESH

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    Of course.....Right when they were finally getting somewhere Something has to happen.
    Even though its his fault I kinda feel bad for Johnny.
    November 27th, 2009 at 05:49am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I must say I found this amazing again. : )
    November 27th, 2009 at 04:57am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    He slept with her in the janitor's closet. I'm sorry that just sounds so weird and it's funny!
    November 27th, 2009 at 04:38am
  • Linarima

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    I couldn't remember anything, after that stupid fruity cocktail drink that Lina gave me. It wasn't even tasty either!
    tssk! I'm able to make fucking fruity cocktails that ARE tasty ;)
    anyhow, loved it :)
    although Johnny and Jazz are a bit fast in my opinion...
    but you said next chapter wouldn't be like that.... omg. I know... attack from that Veronica chick.
    xD anyhow... can't wait for CH.38
    November 27th, 2009 at 03:06am
  • Megan xo

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    i like like like like it. (:
    November 26th, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    AWWWW! You were right! I did do it to early! They are so cute! I just can't....keep....it...in! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Okay, now that I got that out of my system, I don't think they are moving to early. She is finally happy!
    November 26th, 2009 at 07:45pm
  • thePHunkmaster

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    Aw no, he isn't going to do something stupid again is he?!
    November 26th, 2009 at 03:29am
  • rockstarsNredpants

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    Awh; This chapter was really cute.. <3 I like that Johnny and Jazz are getting together. just sayiin;
    <33 :)
    November 25th, 2009 at 11:13pm