I'll Show You My World - Comments

I really really really really really really really love these two characters you have here. And you write just as poetically as I do, my dear, if not more.

This story is another of my very favorites.

irockharderthenyou:

I love it. It's one of the best written stories I've found on mibba so far.

Wow! Thanks! That means SO MUCH to me! (Seeing how there are like, thousands of stories on Mibba.)

I love it. It's one of the best written stories I've found on mibba so far.

ahaha, I'd never date a guy who said ci-tay, or par-tay :P poor Garrett :( liked the update :)

This is a really good story so far. I like it! Update soon=D

I like this. Both characters are very interesting, which means I'll still like it even if it's all mushy romance stuff.

Garrett reminds me of Dustfinger from Inkheart. But I read it so long ago, I have no clue why. x.x

I like it. But instead of putting customer, you kept putting costumer. Just so you know. Otherwise, great job.

GeekoFressh:

this story is great so far
:)
i love the different storyline

Thanks. And yes, it is quite different, isn't it? That's what I like about it when the idea popped into my head.

this story is great so far
:)
i love the different storyline

LethalxDose:

very well written, awesome plot idea, I think its gonna be a good one :)

Thanks! Oh I'm glad you think so! =)

very well written, awesome plot idea, I think its gonna be a good one :)