Alter High - Comments

Nice, but. . .there needs to be line breaks in between the paragraphs :shifty

Ah!

This is great!

I can't wait for more!(:

Yes, it should. I'll change it right now. :cute:

And thank you everybody!

“They gate to the music room is open!

Should it not be the gate rather than they gate?

Very good second chapter though.

Wow, that was hot. ~~
I loved the second chapter and thought it was amazing and the death scene was like
WHOA!
As for the ending of the chapter, I sense my character and Shawn's fate.
Can't wait! :weird

WOO, MY DEATH SCENE! :crazy: I love how she keeps her heels on during sex and how she plays with Avery; definitely something Sabrina would do. Ugh, I'm sad to see her go already, but the sluts must always be killed first. I'm so attached to this girl. :XD

Awesome second chapter. Completely made of win. :mrgreen:

I just read this now and oh my god.
THAT WAS AMAZING FOR A FIRST CHAPTER :mrgreen:

No seriously :cute:
I can't wait for more!

Yay! :crazy:

And yay you used the pic I "submitted" for the banner! :tehe:

Tis exciting.

My friend told me about this and now it's up YAY
It's good, i really like it, it got me hooked which is what I was hoping for
This is an awesome idea!!

*Subscribes while giggling* Finally! I have read it, I have giggled my fangirl laugh, and I have loved it! And I'm not even going to say I'm dreading the wait for the next chapter...

Charmless.:

This is amazing you guys! I am so surprised how much enthusiasm there is about this story.

i love the banner[:

I editted it [the banner] :cute:

I love how the first thing is a murder. in the fountain. Oh yesss...

This is amazing you guys! I am so surprised how much enthusiasm there is about this story.

i love the banner[:

devine.:

^^ I'm sorry, I didn't realize you weren't able to edit it.
Yes, it's been fixed.

When its an multi authoured story only the person who posts a chapter can edit it.

^^ I'm sorry, I didn't realize you weren't able to edit it.
Yes, it's been fixed.

The Strokes:

^So it should. Thanks, never proofread it.

Devine, can you change that? 'Cause you posted the chapter, I can't edit. :shifty

Welcome.
:mrgreen:

^So it should. Thanks, never proofread it.

Devine, can you change that? 'Cause you posted the chapter, I can't edit. :shifty

Heh. Well its up. I didnt realise till yesterday.

Anyhoo, very good chapter. Obviously. Soo much planning went into this so its hardly a surprise. More soon pleasums?

Oh and yano the
A girl screams; ”Probably Sabrina,” Ms. Gallagher thinks, before call out to the students, “All right, everyone find a wall, walk around the edge of the room until we’re all together again.” it?

Should it not be. "'Probably Sabrina,' Mr. Gallagher thinks, before calling" rather than "before call" ?

Just wondering.

I like :shifty

Cult Member Fan come and comment this now :weird

Gah, I can't wait for the second part.
You have my attention now :weird