July 24th, 2009 at 04:52am
My. God.
You make me want to go down to Illinois and smack you.
But at the same time I wanna do this: :arms:
Love/hate relationship.
MOAR?! >.<
Life Sentence - Comments
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July 21st, 2009 at 09:36pm
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Mikey needs to fuck off! Cheating whore...
Poor Frankie, he loves both.
MORES!July 21st, 2009 at 09:02pm -
I'm subscribing to dis. It is extremely good, especially with all of the twists. I've been gasping for a while, and it is all because of this story. Very good Ellie. :cute:
You seriously need to updat this.
xoxo Fuck Sincerely
~Frankie's BitchJuly 21st, 2009 at 04:47am -
...WOAH. Twisty like a fuckin' pretzel!
MORES! I am so subscribing.July 21st, 2009 at 03:00am -
Wow, really intense. Poor Mikey! And Poor Frankie! And Poor Gerard! Ahh! Twisted!July 20th, 2009 at 10:40am
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ksjdklsajdklsj!!
Epic twist there! I love how you painted the picture so that Gerard seemed like the bad guy, but really he's nothing but one of the victims in Mikey's twisted little game! I've got a feeling that Mikey's going to try to get Frank back, but he doesn't deserve him. What he did was cowardly and stupid, and i'm sure Frank would agree.
'Trojan. That's really what I wanted to think about while about to have sex; a big sweaty warrior.'
Haha! You have no idea how much that made me laugh! Condoms will never be the same again.
So...yeah. Excellent story with amazing twists. I will be subscribing.July 12th, 2009 at 08:33pm -
D:
you have to write more
this is a awesome storiee
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hehe
i`ll be waiiting for new onesJune 22nd, 2009 at 04:05pm -
Oh.
I didn't comment.
I guess I should now.
MIKEY DOESN'T FUCKING DESERVE FRANKIE!! I SHOULD GO BUY A MIKEY BEAR AND SHOOT IT WITH MY BB GUN!!
Moar soon please! xDJune 19th, 2009 at 05:15pm -
DUUUUDE.
Mikey. That douche bag. >>June 18th, 2009 at 01:04am -
ok.....i like this. but...if mikey didn't really die...the why did gerard go to jail...?June 17th, 2009 at 09:11pm
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O-M-G! Fuck My Life!!!!!!!
This Story Is Fuckin AMAZIN!!! =D
Itz Sooo Original!!
Keep Writing!! I'm Hooked & Not Refusin!! =]June 17th, 2009 at 08:47pm -
what the fuck?!?!?!?!? i wanna know what happens!!!!June 14th, 2009 at 08:06pm
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Ummm.... what? o.o
Mikey's ALIVE?
What the shit?! Confusedddd.June 9th, 2009 at 02:47am -
OMG! Mikey's alive???? You gotta update!June 9th, 2009 at 01:56am
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*le gasp!!!* Mikey?!?!? How...? That make no sense, but I love it!!! First few chapters made me cry. I can't wait for the next update!!!June 6th, 2009 at 02:22am
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...Gasp?
Uh I mean GASP!!
MIKEY IS BACKO?!?!?!June 4th, 2009 at 02:58am -
*new reader*
OMG!!!!!!!!
THIS STORY IS EFFING GREAATTT!!!!!!!!!!May 30th, 2009 at 07:16am -
Ellie...Ima kill you.
THERE WAS NOTHING BUT SEX!!
You're a filthy liar.
Now you have a brain-dead 13-year-old. xP
I'm scared to ask for more chapters....May 27th, 2009 at 12:54am -
Hm.
I liked the plot a lot. It's nothing like I've ever read, and trust me, I've read a lot. That is a really, really good thing! Stories with similar plots as everybody else's isn't really that much to read. So good going there!
Though, I do have more to say. The story is lovely, but it's kind of .. well, I don't know, it's not exiting. It's not boring, but as soon as you've gotten in to the plot, you kind of know what's going to happen next. What you should do is to make a huge turn in the story. Something original. I'm not telling you to turn Gee into a monkey or something, just write something no one has expected.
Though, I love the story, and I will surely subscribe after this comment. It's awesome the way Frankie was so afraid of, and hated Gee, but at the same time he loved him. In som kind of bizarre way.
Please do continue the story, it's a lovely story, and if you turn the pages right, you will never have to worry about it again. I can tell that by the right amount of time out into it, this story will go far.
xo TeyanaMay 14th, 2009 at 07:41pm
xoxo Fuck Sincerely
~Frankie's Bitch