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  • Fronkensteen

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    Haha, I love this ^^ Their sheer dislike for children warms my heart!

    Robert's weird. I mean, he's pink. That alone makes things creepy. But I like him =D
    September 30th, 2009 at 11:35am
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    You are really on to something with this story, Vlad; you are! What you might want to watch is the tempus, you get it wrong some times. Other than that, it's bloody brilliant! But I want to see more of Nat ;)

    Oh, and by the way, I love Robert. Perfect name for a spider ^^
    September 13th, 2009 at 08:13pm
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    You lied to me.
    You told me you couldn't write like this! Liar...

    (Btw, I really liked it! It is a series right? 'Cause I want to read more!)
    May 27th, 2009 at 12:51pm
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