You’ll Be the One Standing behind the Loaded Gun - Comments

AWHHHH the end of this chapter made me sad. i can't help but imagine the hell that Frankie is in for when his parents find out...gah.. This is the last thing that poor kid needs.

AND OMGGG can I just say that I missed this story SO much since the last update. Like, I would reread it just to get a taste of how much I adore it. Seriously, its so good!

I can't wait for the next update, even though i have a feeling it won't be a good one for Frank. :(

XoJen<3

The end of this made me laugh :) I love how cute their relationship is. And, I like how simple Frank's problems are becoming compared to what he used to go through. Compared to his dad, going to the principals is a piece of cake :)

Did I mention how much I missed this storY? 'Cause I really did. Tis my favorite you know...and all of this time without it, made me a twitchy, shivery mess. Lol. But seriously, I'm just joking. I know you're probably busy. I'm just glad there's an update :D

Can't wait for more!

XO Jen

P.s I hope all is going well in ur life :)))

The end of this made me laugh :) I love how cute their relationship is. And, I like how simple Frank's problems are becoming compared to what he used to go through. Compared to his dad, going to the principals is a piece of cake :)

Did I mention how much I missed this storY? 'Cause I really did. Tis my favorite you know...and all of this time without it, made me a twitchy, shivery mess. Lol. But seriously, I'm just joking. I know you're probably busy. I'm just glad there's an update :D

Can't wait for more!

XO Jen

P.s I hope all is going well in ur life :)))

Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!
Mikey is being such a dickhead!
Gerard and Frankie are so cute together. And Frank better get out of his parent's house pronto. I loveeeee this story. It deserves more comments than this.
Update soon.. Please??

Gabby mikey makes me so mad. Why cant he just stop being an ass and everyone can live happily ever after (cause then the story would have little plot line...) but that's not the point. Stupid mikey.
And I'm scared to find out what happens wIth franks dad. Something tells me that things are going to get really ugly really fast. Gahhhh I love this story and cant wait for more.

Xoxo Jen.

Ps sorry for my shitty (and sometimes nonexistent) comments. I suck, I know. I'll try to be better cause this story is awesome and deserves it. :). Hope your doin well <3

Gah I'm behind in my reAding. I swear, I could fucking kill mikey. "oh yeah sure we're fine Frankie. But I'm still gonna be a total prick and not let you associate with my brother." I mean really. WhAt the fuck is that?!? He's so stupid. But the movie theater thing made me happy. At least frank is doing what's best for his own well being.
Mikey makes me mad. >:(
Loved the update. Can't wait for more. :)

Xo jen

I hate Mikey. Frank should just tell him to go to hell if he can't handle Frank being with Gerard.

Fucking mikey. Dude what the he'll is wrong with you?! THIS ISN'T ABOUT YOU, YOU SELFISH ASSHOLE. Gahh he makes me so mad.
I wanna know what gee and Frankie are gonna talk about. :).
I would comment more, but I'm really ill and the light of my computer is not helping. But you know I love this story.
Can't wait for more.

Xo Jen.

Ah I was behind a chapter. MIKEY YOU ASSHOLE. gah. Like I get that he feels betrayed or whatever, but this isn't about him. I thought for sure Frankie was gonna try to kill himself or something after that happened it had me really worried. But what has me more worried is the way he's acting now...he's like comatose or something. Did he take pills or is he just spaced out? Gahh and Gerard...WHAT THE FUCK. he's supposed to be suportivr of frank, and shutting him down like that cannot lead to good things in the future. Makes my heart break to see things regressing like this. But damn, it makes for one he'll of a story. :). This was awesome andamazin emotional. You nailed every asspect perfectly. You are a truly amazing writter. :). Can't wait for more.

Xo Jen.

OMg. I haven't been onion a couple of days and BAM!! There's two updates waiting for me in alm of their glory. ::melts::

I love that they're moving forward in their relationship, but are still sensitive to the unfortunate situation that theyre in. I've got a sinking suspicion that Mikey is going to be a real problem in up coming chapters. Bt who knows...you could throw us a curveball and have him be all wonderful and understanding. But something tells me things won't be that easy, they never seem to be for these two.
I like the happiness of this chapter, it balanced out the seriousness of the last couple updates quite smoothly. :). So great.
Anyways..I haven't slept in three days..or inwud leave a longer comment. But I'm falling asleep on my keyboard.
I love this story, and needless to say, can't wait for more. :)))

Xo Jen

I really like this story. It's really detailed what Frank is going through and how he thinks of everything.

Update soon?

Aww sweet :)

Where are you moving to London from?

This chapter was fantastic. Frank opening up to Gerard was so great. I am so glad he has Gerard to confide in and to help him and care for him. Vomiting - GROSS! lol. Every time something happened, I was thinking "They are just going to sit near the vomit?" and "He is going to kiss him after he threw up?" But you addressed every issue perfectly. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. This story is one of my favorites!

P.S. This is the longest comment I have ever left! lol

I'm crying. Not like the "oh my eyes are a little watery cry". No. I'm like full on crying right now, you jerk.
This has been my favorite chapter so far, whi h is saying something because I've loved them all so much. It was just so perosnal..I dot ven know what it was that made it so relatable, but I guess that's the definition of good writing huh? And when frank finally confessed his problem, by heart just about exploded.
And when gee pulled away from the kiss, I started crying even harder. I thought he was really going to turn frnak down and thay just killed me.
Btw, still crying.
This was beautiful. They're relationship is so pure and innocent and loving all in one and I love how effortlessly you portray it. You amaze me every chapter.
Btw sorry if any of this is jumbled in typos, my vision I'd currently impaired with tears.
I can't wait for more of this. This update made an awful day a little bit brighter, and I thank you for that.
Hope all is well with you. <3

Xo Jen

Ahhh page claim.

::dances like a doofus::

xD

" I pulled it out and left the bag sitting there open for everyone to see."

Something tells me that that^^ is foreshadowing to frank getting busted for his pill popping. Maybe it's just wishful thinking on my behalf though. Cause I really want him to get caught before it's too late. Maybe he wants all of this to end too...cause he was being pretty careless by just leaving his stash out like that..I might be over analyzing this though, bur I hope not.
Again, a great update. I feel so awful for frank.
Great job with the dream sequence at the begging. It really gave an insight to what frank is going through constantly, he can't even escape the horrors of his life in his dreams, and sharing that with the reader really adds to the emotional connection with Frankie.
I hope gee goes after him and confronts him about everything that's going on.
Hope all is well with you dear. :).

Xo. Jen

Aww :( I hope his dad's run away or something :/ Gerard's so sweet helping Frank.

AHH they slept together. haha. Sorry, I'm being immature today :P

I'm ttrying not to say "Poor Frankie" in this one...cause I seem to always say that...but seriously. THis kid just can't seem to catch a break and it simply breaks my heart to read. But alas, hopefully there's a silver lining in this kid's life. Cause at this point, everyhting is looking pretty bleak. Except, he has Gee which is good. I just hope that he doesn't push him away too....and I really wish Gerard would confront him about the pills! AHHH its driving me nuts just watching him destroy himself like that. It makes me want to cry. But ANYWAYYSss....again, a fabulous update. I loved it...and let out a "yay" when i saw it was updated, now my family thinks I'm watching porn or something. haha. But for the record, this is better than porn. ;)
Okayyy I'm gonna go before I make more of an idiot out of myself with this comment :)
Can't wait for more!!!
Xo Jen

Ugh oh. I have a feeling that the grandmas going to pass away soon...that's not going to be good. And Frankie....he's getting worse, I can feel it. God I love this. You are amazing. :).

Xo Jen

Oh dear... what's wrong with Frank now?