Forbidden Love - Comments

  • comedownmachinegirl

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    OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD PLEASE UPDATE I CARE AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! I am almost tempted to ask if I can finish the story for you!
    July 2nd, 2014 at 09:20am
  • Birdy!

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    Thank you for the feedback! Ill look thorough the chapters and check it out :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 01:21am
  • bless

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    You should remove the first chapter of your story being the characters. That is forbidden on Mibba and your story can be easily reported for that.
    As for the content of the story I have stumbled across a few grammar mistakes. Proof reading is a must, but everyone makes mistakes.
    You give generous descriptions an I feel that you have a lot of potential to build off of. Best of luck.
    June 19th, 2012 at 01:13am
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    thanks for updating, can't wait to read more. update soon again please :D
    June 4th, 2011 at 02:24pm
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    lol brendon XD I can't even imagine how embarrassing and traumatic that was haha.
    I'm glad you updated, but please do it again soon! I wanna read more! =D
    May 5th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    i loved this! keep writing. I'm subscribing =)
    April 24th, 2011 at 04:36am
  • Love.Bite

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    I like it so far. I can't wait for more. Update soon :D
    September 2nd, 2010 at 03:03am
  • Wishful-Thinker

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    oh how i missed this :) I need to get on my stories! Great update! :))
    May 3rd, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • moyarb

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    Ash shouldn't let Perez bother her. Stupid Jenny. :P
    December 31st, 2009 at 03:44am
  • Wishful-Thinker

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    hahaha loved it! Hell I would totally birth B-den's babies :P
    December 21st, 2009 at 03:18am
  • TwentiethCenturyGirl

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    I'm a ghost reader! Please could you update, I'm enjoying the story.
    November 5th, 2009 at 07:07pm
  • Just Lyk Skittles

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    H3Y!!
    i read ur story today and i
    really like it
    update soon =]
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:38pm
  • Wishful-Thinker

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    oh snapple. Shits about to go dooooown. Loved the updates. I will have a panic one for you soon :)
    October 29th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • swell

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    20 comments. Now you HAVE to update, yeah?
    September 26th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • moyarb

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    Aw man She missed Friendly's! I want to go to Friendly's! Where Ice cream Makes a Meal!
    September 12th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • Wishful-Thinker

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    ahh I gotta update soon!!! Those were great. Its crazy how well you write me. I actually do sit and watch tv and laugh at the sayings before repeating them aloud. haha
    September 1st, 2009 at 09:45pm
  • lifemeanswriting

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    Uh oh what happened in the hotel room!!!?
    August 21st, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • moyarb

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    what Happened? What Happened? Gosh Darn it Woman Tell me!
    August 11th, 2009 at 03:13am
  • Wishful-Thinker

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    IM EXCITED FOR THE UPDATE!!! So make it happen :P

    poor bden
    August 8th, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • moyarb

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    *Clicks subscribe* Nice job Ash. Real Nice.
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:09am