Forbidden Love - Comments

OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD PLEASE UPDATE I CARE AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! I am almost tempted to ask if I can finish the story for you!

Thank you for the feedback! Ill look thorough the chapters and check it out :)

You should remove the first chapter of your story being the characters. That is forbidden on Mibba and your story can be easily reported for that.
As for the content of the story I have stumbled across a few grammar mistakes. Proof reading is a must, but everyone makes mistakes.
You give generous descriptions an I feel that you have a lot of potential to build off of. Best of luck.

thanks for updating, can't wait to read more. update soon again please :D

lol brendon XD I can't even imagine how embarrassing and traumatic that was haha.
I'm glad you updated, but please do it again soon! I wanna read more! =D

i loved this! keep writing. I'm subscribing =)

I like it so far. I can't wait for more. Update soon :D

oh how i missed this :) I need to get on my stories! Great update! :))

Ash shouldn't let Perez bother her. Stupid Jenny. :P

hahaha loved it! Hell I would totally birth B-den's babies :P

I'm a ghost reader! Please could you update, I'm enjoying the story.

H3Y!!
i read ur story today and i
really like it
update soon =]

oh snapple. Shits about to go dooooown. Loved the updates. I will have a panic one for you soon :)

20 comments. Now you HAVE to update, yeah?

Aw man She missed Friendly's! I want to go to Friendly's! Where Ice cream Makes a Meal!

ahh I gotta update soon!!! Those were great. Its crazy how well you write me. I actually do sit and watch tv and laugh at the sayings before repeating them aloud. haha

Uh oh what happened in the hotel room!!!?

what Happened? What Happened? Gosh Darn it Woman Tell me!

IM EXCITED FOR THE UPDATE!!! So make it happen :P

poor bden

*Clicks subscribe* Nice job Ash. Real Nice.