October 1st, 2011 at 12:19am
The Art of Subconscious Illusion - Comments
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Pleeeeesae update soon!!!! I love this story, It is definitely one of my favorites... PLEASE!!!September 29th, 2011 at 04:04am
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Yay, an update ^-^. I really love your stories, Hope you update soon :3July 20th, 2011 at 02:27am
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Oh, god, I loved it. Update soon, please x-xApril 22nd, 2011 at 11:10am
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that really good I didn't no it was going to be a frikey... well done. more please. xxDecember 17th, 2010 at 07:38pm
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Fucking adorable man, fucking adorable. Cute story, great writing style, pleasant lack of errors - awesome.October 5th, 2010 at 09:33pm
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legit.
forgot how much i liked this.
^a year ago (:October 1st, 2010 at 04:16am -
interesting.
whatever will happen?October 11th, 2009 at 11:18pm -
i've always loved your writing.July 27th, 2009 at 02:25am
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I believe that this story was up before and I was subscribed to it then, right? I also think you've re-written it somewhat. It seems more detailed than I remember. Of course, that could just be my lousy memory. :)
Anyway, I really like it. Mikey's such a little jerk I really want to shake him! That's so different from the way Mikey is usually written that it makes the story all the more interesting. In a way I can sympathize with him, getting moved away from his home, his school, and all his friends at the same time that his brother is leaving would have to be traumatic. On the other hand, I can only feel so much sympathy for someone who won't put out any effort whatsoever.
I can't wait for him to get pulled out of his shell a little bit. I have the feeling it'll be worth the wait.April 28th, 2009 at 08:02am -
Poor Frank. He was trying to be nice to Mikey by inviting him to walk with the dog and Mikey just shuns him. Can't wait for the first day of school.April 22nd, 2009 at 07:56am
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I like this! It is odd but appealing that Mikey is such a jerk. He seems obnoxiously rude toward Frank, not that Frank was very welcoming when they first met. I look forward to more of this story.April 19th, 2009 at 07:48am
was chapter 17 an illusion I wonder. Hmmmm... I LIKEY!!!! :D
so yeah update soon.