American Dreams - Comments

I apologize for not having anything better to say than:

"Wow. That was pretty darn amazing."

:shifty

Amazing. I loved it. Alot.

O.O

Well, that was way, way, way better than mine. That's for sure.
Pure genious. That's what it is pure genious.

Wow. Just...wow.

That was short and powerful, which is kind of a weird combination. And I had to read it twice, but maybe that's because I'm sleepy. Still...I like that one phrase "Fist burrowed under her eye".

And what I especially like is for once, a domestic-abuse fic shows the pressure of a marriage on the husband. Jingtao would like that. Because for once, its not the wife who breaks down under the pressure of making everything perfect. Husbands are people too. Daddies are people too.

I think this might be my favorite thing that you've written. :arms:

This is incredeible!
I'm always impressed by anyone who can actually tell a complete story in 100 words.
I love your writing style :]