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  • mortal peril.

    mortal peril. (100)

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    ...wow.
    That's really beautiful.
    great job.
    October 19th, 2009 at 09:21am
  • be realistic.

    be realistic. (100)

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    That was beautiful.
    I like how it played out.
    October 17th, 2009 at 11:11pm
  • Boomerang;

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    This is beautiful.

    Miranda does not understand why Danielle does not write more.
    She has true talent that Miranda could only dream of.
    July 17th, 2009 at 06:12am
  • Gibbers

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    Comment swap thread.
    Wow, I'm awed by your writing. This is amazing, you conveyed the feeling of wanting what you can't have so well. I felt bad for the main character, I can't remember his name for the life of me, I'm horrible with names. :P The imagery was subtle but it still grabbed me. Amazing. Keep up the amazing writing for the sake of the readers!
    May 11th, 2009 at 04:11am
  • hip to be square

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    HOLY SHIT DANIELLE
    GO WRITE A NOVEL OR SOMETHING
    YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING BEYOND AMAZING BEYOND AMAZING
    i'm sorry i'm really awful at conveying that :P
    but seriously, this is excellent. i hope you write more soon, this really is wonderful! sad...but wonderful.
    April 24th, 2009 at 07:34pm
  • Starless City;

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    I can't understand why anyone hasn't commented on this yet.

    This was seriously really amazing, you have no idea.
    I loved it a lot. :]
    April 19th, 2009 at 10:38pm
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