Beneath the Soul - Comments

The Warden's Wife:

This is a interesting story, unlike most, you actually don't have a problem with too little detail and I can't really find anything to critique about it.
I really like stories about demons and this one is quite original so I am looking forward to read more.

Wow! Thanks! I'm actually always thinking that I'm not describing things enough or giving enough detail and that's why my chapters or so short. But I'm glad you think so! ^^ I hope you aren't disappointed with future chapters I post.

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I REALLY like what you've done with chapter three. Beautiful descriptions. *-*

This is a interesting story, unlike most, you actually don't have a problem with too little detail and I can't really find anything to critique about it.
I really like stories about demons and this one is quite original so I am looking forward to read more.

Haha. Something's fishy with your computer. This is a VERY nice layout, but the text does run into the picture. It might just be a firefox thing.

Anyway, I LOVE this story. It's brilliant. I'm just dying to read more. ^^

I like this. It sets the mood right. I had a little bit of an issue reading a few of the words because they ran into the background. Maybe make the color a little brighter or darker or something? but don't change the picture. i really like the picture. but good job.