OH MY GOD KELLY! THIS IS AMAZING! IT MAKES ME WISH I WROTE MORE! I love where the story came from. I think you should always include with the story a little info on how you got the idea.
You....I have no words to describe how awesome you are
Hahaha. I knew you'd love it. XD But don't you think I should get you an account of your own on here so you're not using mine to make comments, Lilly? *raises eyebrows*