How She Became His Everything - Comments

  • Mahini

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    omg, This is an amazing story. I cried at the end, I cant believe Gerard is going to be put to death :'(
    You are an amazing writer, keep up the great work :)
    August 22nd, 2010 at 06:51am
  • Emily Riddle

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    So I read the whole story. Actually, this story made me cry when I read the remaining final chapters. I can't believe what I just read. I love how the story goes. I love every chapter of it. :) Keep going dear, I love the story.
    March 5th, 2010 at 08:43am
  • EarlySunsetDays

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    This was such an amazing story. I liked how the story made a turn with her finding out about an accident she was in, and losing her memory and finding out that Gerard was her fiance. The ending was so sad :] I loved the story so much
    September 28th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    wow, makes me want to cry
    September 23rd, 2009 at 01:05am
  • dreamerforever

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    I thought I commented on this. Maybe I did, maybe I didn't. It's still really good, though. I hope they can get him out!!
    September 12th, 2009 at 02:05am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    wowie
    August 20th, 2009 at 08:16am
  • awwsugar.

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    This story is awesome i love it! :)
    August 17th, 2009 at 08:17pm
  • Leanimal

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    I just started reading this last night and Oh MY GOD!!! This is mind blowing!!!! That's the best way to describe this...I'd realllly apperciate it if you'd update :]
    -Leanne Michelle
    August 17th, 2009 at 02:41am
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    wows! more soon plz! loves it!
    August 15th, 2009 at 08:46pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    hey! please please please update.... i've waited long enough!!! please!
    August 4th, 2009 at 12:30am
  • OliviaDF

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    Oh shit!
    This story is brutal!
    I love it.
    :D
    June 13th, 2009 at 05:16pm
  • Stacey.

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    Yup, posting a new chapter really soon
    June 10th, 2009 at 04:57pm
  • Shark

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    Are you going to finish this story?
    June 5th, 2009 at 05:47am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I just got finished reading this story and oh my god.... fuck. it all started making sense near the end! Eliza was killed because she was trying to get Lynn to know the truth, right? Oh damn... I love this story!
    May 27th, 2009 at 03:41am
  • Shark

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    :'( I wonder what Lynn's going to do now. But what I don't understand is why was Eliza being a bitch to Lynn if she wanted to remind Gerard to tell Lynn the truth? Am I getting the story right? lol
    May 26th, 2009 at 06:46pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    oh my god, so it ws her all along? what? i'm so confused. but in a good way. keep em coming!!!
    May 25th, 2009 at 10:50pm
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    HOLY SHIT!!!!! i did not see that coming
    May 25th, 2009 at 06:57pm
  • Shark

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    That's so sad :(
    Is it the last chapter? :(
    I want Gerard and Lynn to fix things up.
    May 25th, 2009 at 09:16am
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    oh my god. she had a short term amnesia? wow. i never saw that coming. way to go. by far this is one of the most interesting stories i've read. it's pretty crazy. go you!
    May 24th, 2009 at 06:58pm
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    awwwwwwwsssss i can't believe GeeBear did that!!

    wuvs it can't wait for more!!
    May 24th, 2009 at 04:30pm