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  • Invader Spiffy

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    <3 Awesome! :)
    January 8th, 2010 at 02:18am
  • misstrinity811

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    I miss this story :( update soon?
    November 7th, 2009 at 09:41pm
  • november rain;

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    Just read it, thought it was pretty awesome. :P

    And I think rushed is better than long-winded, so yeah.

    Update soon, kays? X]
    June 19th, 2009 at 04:27pm
  • Revenge 5

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    its amaizing. your really good keep on writing!
    June 19th, 2009 at 12:59am
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    your comprimise was amazing. i really like this story but i sorta of agree with Lites.Camera.ACTION!. its a tad bit rushed but i really love it so please update wicked soon!
    April 24th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • gothxcookiesx478

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    Please update soon!!!! Oh, and does Jared come back?
    April 24th, 2009 at 03:17am
  • yourajerk.

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    CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM REPORT: I liked it, but it's too rushed and too unbelievable for me to really enhoy it.
    April 23rd, 2009 at 10:51pm
  • misstrinity811

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    Perfect
    April 23rd, 2009 at 10:18pm
  • BethanyVengeance

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    Amazing (:
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    April 23rd, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • Devihla

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    This was so much better than my suggestion! Yay!
    April 23rd, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    awww poor ray, i feel so bad for him. i say you should defintely make it gerard. jared is such a jerk. i really really love this story so pleae please update wicked soon!
    April 23rd, 2009 at 03:23pm
  • Devihla

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    I totally love this story! It's so amazing and cute! :D
    The truth shall be heard from kids and drunk people - and kids don't need liquid in order to tell the truth, so go kids! :P

    As to your last question there, I'm kinda torn. It would be cute if it was Gerard, but then he'd see Ray and get the wrong idea and so... But if it was Jared, then he'd probably hit Frank and then Gerard would be all worried and protective...
    I wanna see Jared, I think... :D

    But please prove me wrong... :D
    April 22nd, 2009 at 07:04pm
  • poisonedpills

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    i just wanted to let you know that i'm a new subscriber and i absolutely have fallen in love with this story already. i love your writing style and can't wait to see where you take this story..it has a lot of potential. keep up the great work. oh, and in response to your author's note...i seriously think either will be an interesting read.
    April 22nd, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • gothxcookiesx478

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    This is awesome! Please update soon! And Nicky is so cute!
    April 21st, 2009 at 10:19pm
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    hey i'm a new reader and i've got say i love this story. its so amazing. i love nick's bluntness. update wicked soon!
    April 21st, 2009 at 05:00pm
  • BeatenBut_NotBroken

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    Aawww, Nick is so adorable. I love his fowardness haha.

    Update soon:)
    April 21st, 2009 at 04:47am
  • misstrinity811

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    I like this chapter and the last one as well.

    sorry I didn't comment on the last one, I never really have time to comment because i'm loaded with homework lately.
    April 21st, 2009 at 04:39am
  • xeverystarfallx

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    NICKY IS A CELEBRITY!!!!
    haha, its quite good dollface, i suggest you keep working on it yes???
    April 20th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • xeverystarfallx

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    NICKY IS A CELEBRITY!!!!
    haha, its quite good dollface, i suggest you keep working on it yes???
    April 20th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • Devihla

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    Oh, I'm in on that game! :D
    Comment = quick update?
    April 19th, 2009 at 11:02pm
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