The Gifted - Comments

I liked it. Just a few capital and grammatical errors, and it needs a lot more detail. But other than that, it's good.

sounds interestin ill read the whole story later!

Nice....its pretty good

i like it so far. really nice lol

I like it :D
"she's basically a bad ass." Lmao
I would love to see this take off =]

thanks guys srry ive been lazy it will be up soon

hahaha.
I left a comment lalala!

Hey! I told you I'd read it so here I am :) Post the next chapter soon kay?

I like it but I think you need a little more detail, like keep in mind what are your charactors wearing how does their eye color resinate, and is there any attributes attributed to their powers, btw: you may jut wanna list charactors like
ex:
zane: 5'9...power of water, dating whoever or not, age
rose: charactor bio
ex...
it may help orginize everything
hope it helped :) now make your rreaders entraced in it that way they can't just leave the story, add details and it'll come to life :) :D

Nice XP

i like it so far,
keep it up =D