Misery - Comments

I love this story. :)

AHH intense

Well shit. Dave is such a sweetie! I think that he and Cat are gonna end up being best friends. Cam is just a little too pushy for my liking. I think it's good that his teammates know that he's got a girlfriend and has had one for so long. I'm sure the treatment they will give him will make him realize what a wanker he has been.

Although, I agree with Lynne. I'd prefer a happy ending with Bur but I see that you are clearly adding drama to this because well it's fun haha. But please make sure she sticks with Adam. But he needs to realize that he's completely lost without her. =]

Greatttt stuff =D

Okay, you know how much I want a Happy Burish ending to this story, so apart from the fact that I was not pleased by this chapter, I loved it. (If that makes sense, lmao)

Dave is unbelievably sweet right now, and I guess I can see why there can't be sexy times with him.

I'm glad Burr decided to man up, but way to take too long, asshole.

And, Sharpie made me smile with that comment of his about his girlfriend. *sigh*

Happy. Burish. Ending.

I love Chapter4!!! I can't wait to see where this is going to go!

I love it and i ca't wait for more!!

Loved it! It would be Adam's luck that his girlfriend ends up meeting his teammates at a club.
"You're a dick." Ah, Bolland's understatement of the year =]

AAAAHHHHHHHAAAAA!!!! I love Dave Bolland for that. Simply amazing.

i'm seeeeriously in love with this :)

AWWWW
I knew there was always a reason I still loved David Bolland. lol
Man the 'Hawks are filled with my Knights (L)

Soo the ending made me smile. I like how all that Dave said was "you're a dick." Adam's gonna get it from his teammates. Which is a good thing cause maybe he will actually realize what a douche he's being. And now his teammates know her and stuff. She's so subtle about everything 'oh we've been together for six years' and she acts like its nothing. Oh Dave made the end of this so awesome. Can't wait to see where you go with this WIFEY! =]

Haha, of course you'd blame your puppy. Because you know no one could ever be mad at her!

Anyways, on to the chapter. I loved it, as usual. It's nice to see that she actually met some of his teammates, even though he didn't introduce her. I'm waiting to see how they interact with Adam now that they know he's been lying for the last 6 years about having a girlfriend!

I can't wait for more!

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hehe someone got caught!!! LOVE IT

I loooove the most recent chapter, she finally met some of his team mates. =) and good for people telling him hes an asshole

Heh, I disappeared with Troy. Where did we goooo I wonder? =))

And omfg, DAVE BOLLAND IS AMAZINGGGGG. I loved it.

CAT SHOULD TOTALLY BANG HIM.

Definitely worth the wait, and I forgive your puppy. =D

hahah i loved the ending of this chapter. adam totally deserved that. love this keep it up...update soon!

I love this! It's so good, keep em coming :)

it is so good. i love it

So no, this definitely is not happy yet. BUT, it IS getting somehwere, what with Cat confronting Adam and everything. Oh man, Adam better CHANGE. HAPPY ENDING WANTED. HAPPY BURISH ENDING. Pleaseandthankyou.

“That’s all I need,” He told her, suggestively cracking a joke. ---> HEH.