Writings Of A Child Of The Millennia - Comments

Awesome so far! :) I like it. Very creative and brilliant, too. :)

Awesome so far! :) I like it.

I very much enjoy getting another look into the life that is Marius'.
It's very intriguing and exactly how I imagine Marius going about certain things.
You should definitely update this again soon. :cute:

Olivia's an amazing writer :cute:

I think perhaps this was one of my favourite entries so far, although I feel a little horrible for saying that.

I liked the way you wrote this, I think that's what it was. It was also pretty exciting. :tehe:

The only thing I have to suggest is perhaps separating the chapters into more paragraphs?

Oh, I should have commented on this much sooner. Yes, I should have.

This is simply marvelous, and I find myself in envy of it. I very much enjoyed the most recent entry (one can only imagine why :tehe: ), and I find myself attempting to work up an update for my own journal.

I do love the bringing in of the backstory with each new entry. It is amazing. I love. Yes. I do.

Ahh, very amazing.
I love the descriptions.

Ah, it was short but very, very sweet. I'm starting to fall even more in love with your writing. :cute:

And I love learning more about the history between you and Armand.

This is very impressive. I meant to comment before now, but it's very good. I may start one soon.

Ah, I loved the update.
Can't wait for more, Marius. ~~

Two short chapters in and I've already learned a lot about you Marius.
You are a very interesting individual.
I cannot wait for your next update.

I have to agree with both of them.
The way you wrote this is just perfect and as if I was sitting on the floor besides you as you write that in your journal.
It's magnificent. :cute:

My only criticism is that it ended so abruptly. I'd have liked this more if it had been longer, but I suppose that since you'll update it later, I'll just have to be patient. Other than that, it was absolutely wonderful, and I look forward to part 2!

Oh, wow. Seriously, wow.
I love your style of writing - it's amazing. The descriptions were stunning.
And the way you portray Marius is exactly how I would picture him if he were writing a journal.
I really can't wait for more. -grins-